Musical Other Half - When you have this comfortable, almost weirdly natural bond with someone whose friendship with you just matters a lot, wouldn't you do everything to keep it going?
My Review - A good prologue so it's a good start. And you say English is not your first language? Seriously? I felt your English was much better than quite a few 'English Speaking' author's out here. No spelling mistakes and grammar errors so hat's off to you. Your character's seemed quite interesting, while your plot was original and fresh.
Only thing, your description was a little, hmm not specific? you should work on that because people usually read your story based of on your summary and then your cover. I would also suggest maybe a new cover? Something quite light and attractive. It always attracts readers, trust me, I am one of them.
Overall, I really liked this story, and apart from the summary and the cover, I really like your idea.
My Score - 7/10.
Note - Give this story a read for its originality and good grammar. I wasn't disappointed.
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Regards,
Lisa.
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