Mated To A Jerk - Alyson Greene is a werewolf, well she a fatass nerd that no one really liked. They bullied her because of how she looks. Everyone was disgusted of her, even her own brother and supposed to be father. But worst of all, the person who was supposed to love her : CHASE ANDERSON, her mate.
Obviously she gets rejected that resulted for her to leave. Finding better friends and pack. But years passed and her pack needs a new land to stay on because of the danger from rogues - or was it really just the rogues???
She has changed - a lot. She is currently a knight from the seven star knights, protecting the royal family and all the shifters.
Would her life go smoothly as she wanted or would her the attraction to her mate keep her from doing what she is supposed to do. While her past is coming after her?
"Never run away from your problems, because the farther you run the more tracks you leave, the more bigger your problem becomes so just stand up and face them."
My Review - Your prologue was alright. Not good not bad either. Quite interesting as a matter of fact.
Chapter one was very confusing. You need to work on your sentences well. Don't jump scenes so much. It makes the reader want to leave your story, especially those who give grammar much importance. Don't use so many question marks and capitals in your summary or even in the chapters. It annoys at times.
You said you will be editing soon and you should. at least the starting five chapters should be done as soon as you can.
But overall, I liked your plot. It was quite good. I am not a werewolf genre reading person, but I liked this so I give you extra points for that.
My Score - 6.5/10.
Note - Editing needs to be done but still give it a read. It's a good plot.
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Lisa.
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