Of Wolf and Man - Jack is part of an on the rise metal band. Otaku is a fan. Normal men, or so it seems; both have dark secrets, both are on the run from their past. When they meet everything in their lives is turned upside down, and the past has a chance to catch up.
My Review - Summary was alright. Not good, not bad. Short and sweet, so it's fine.
Chapter one, I would suggest not to jump P.O.V's so much and also break your paragraphs. Not many people (Including myself) like long para's. It's boring in my opinion. Your grammar seemed fairly alright, so that's okay.
Overall, I am not a person to read boyxboy stories, but this was alright. Not bad. There is room for improvement.
My Score - 6/10.
Note - This is a boyxboy story. If it doesn't float your boat, then I suggest you don't read it but otherwise this story has potential.
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Regards,
Lisa.
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