So Much For My Happy Ending - The plot revolves around a girl who gets pregnant at a party.
My Review - The start of your story is very confusing. You have jumped P.O.V's a lot and frankly, it's annoying. One sentence for one person's P.O.V then another, then back to the same person is really not going to get you many reads.
And also the events move very fast like one sentence your lead is opening a gift the next she is all dressed up! It doesn't make sense.
I suggest you begin editing or you won't get much readers.
(I apologise if I sound cruel, but it's for your own benefit.)
My Score - 5/10.
Note: Major editing is needed.
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Regards,
Lisa.
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