Whoever made the word Smut or every made Smut in their story and had everyone else do it needs to go somewhere because Smut is plain out nasty! Like I feel like some of you guys who write it watch Porn and then go ahead and write it out in full detail like every single little thing is like never left out and it's so nasty and so gross!
Also, if your gonna write smut, have it make sense or at least try! If you don't wan to put smut in your book, then don't! It's your book, your choice!
Smut that has no detail be like:
We did it. It was so glorious. His body against mine. I felt every touch. I can't wait to do this again.
-_- Why? Just why try if that's all you write.
Smut that has EVERY detail be like:
His body was rubbing against mine. The folicles of his pubic hair were rubbing against me. His big lips were caressing me and I felt his rough, big, stringy hand on my neck. He was screaming in lucious, loud yelling, screaming, rolling ecstasy.
-_- Ok we get it jesus Christ! Chill out fam!
A book that has good smut has to have these three factors: Beginning, Middle and Ending. You can't have one without the other just gonna put that out there.
I also hate people who are like, NO SMUT IN THIS BOOK EVER and then write some NASTY NASTY smut and I am just like -_- You got such good talent why hide it! I mean writing smut is not a talent it's nasty but like I read books with light smut and only 3 books in my library have heavy smut but the book is good so I skip over it.
Ok well that's enough of my ranting for today! Adios Amigos y Amigas ( I take Spanish 1 don't judge me.)
