Surprise party

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-Nelly-

"Come on nelly, we are going shopping." Mom said, grabbing my hand.

"Why? We're gonna miss the party!" I yelled in a whisper.

"No, i promise we will be back in time." She said, grabbing my shoes and handing them to me. I put them on and ran out to the car. Mom got in a minute later.

We took off and went to the mall to go shopping. Usually, i don't let people buy stuff for me but mom said it was half of my birthday present.

-Louis-

El took Nelly shopping so we can set up for the party. Liam and Zayn went to go get a lot of balloons. Niall, Harry and i got decoration duty. Yes, I did just say DUTY.

I heard Niall scream from the other room, that kid can be pretty clumsy. I run into the room to see him on the floor next to the couch.

"Niall, what did you do this time?" Harry said, rushing in.

"I fell off the couch trying to hang up this stupid 'HAPPY BIRTHDAY' poster! I swear everything hates me!" He exaggerates too much. 

I help him up and Harry helps him hang up the poster. I go back into the kitchen to hang up more things.

Liam and Zayn come home put the balloons in random spots. After they finish they help decorate before people come.

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Everyone started showing up and i decided to text Eleanor that she can come home soon.

Me: Almost everyone is here. Ill let you know when everyone is here. K? I love you! XX

I shoved my phone back into my pocket. And went to see if everyone was here yet. After 5 minutes i went to see who's not here yet.

"Paul, is everyone here?" I say walking up to Paul, who is standing in front of the door

He looks at the list and nods. Now i have to text El to come home.

Me: You can come home now! Everyone's here! XX

I shoved my phone back into my pocket and told everyone how i told El to head home.

"So everyone. When i get a text from Eleanor saying shes almost home, we need to go into hide mode. Get it, got it, good!" I yell over everyone.

Everyone's talking and i hear my phone ding.

Baby:  We are down the street i forgot to text you. Hurry!

"Everyone! In your spots they are about to pull in the driveway! Hurry!" I scream.

Everyone runs to their hiding spot and waits for Nelly and Eleanor to walk in.

I hear the door open and everyone jumps up and yelled "SURPRISE! HAPPY BIRTHDAY NELLY!"

She has tears in her eyes. She drops her bags and runs to me. She tackled me into a big bear hug. Me being me, i tackled her back.

"Thank you so much dad." she whispers in my ear.

"Anything for my baby girl." I whisper back before letting go.

"Let's get this party started!" She screams and everyone yells "Woo hoo!" Back.

I look around to see everyone dancing and having a good time, but Nelly.

I run up to Harry to see if he knows. "hey mate, have you seen Nelly?"

"No sorry find Ed, he is her favorite singer. She might be talking to him." He suggests, i nod and mumble a thank you.

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