The Revised Concept

Chapter 3: "Random Thoughts"

It's a quarter after one, I'm all alone and I need you now.
Said I wouldn't call but I've lost all control and I need you now.
And I don't know how I can do without.
I just need you now.

- Need You Now by: Lady Antebellum

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Zoey's POV

"Hey baby. It's okay! Hush now. Everything will gonna be okay." Mom? Was that my mom? Still, everything was so dark and the place keep on haunting me.

"Mom? Where are you?"

Silence.

"Mom! I'm here. Please help me!"

Silence.

"Mom...Ca...Can't...you he...ar..me? (sob)"

"Hey! Wake up! It's okay sunshine."

A light shake on my shoulders brought back my awareness. I was lying on a soft olden blanket. I forced to open my eyes  and a stranger's face welcome me with a gentle smile. 

He has an amazing feature and a clean hair cut. I didn't observed that I was staring at him for a seconds.

"Hey sunshine! Are you okay or you'll gonna be okay?" He said in a worried tone.

I blinked my eyes. "Y...yes. I am okay." All I can say.

He helped me to sat down. He was wearing a white shirt and a ripped jeans, thick eye-glasses were o his eyes, though I can tell that he has these amazing brown eyes.

"You have the same color of eyes" as my subconscious said.

Wait! Where am I again? Who's this awesome creature? I cut all the thoughts alluring me. I keep on staring at the stranger's adorable face. I just can't help it!

Oh gosh! Wait! Wait! Wait! Is he really a living creature? My panic disease attacked me once again.

I scanned the place, medium-sized of wooden table was on the left side with one big leopard back pack on top. The dim light of flashlight was the only source of lit that's why I can't examine the whole place properly.

I inhaled and exhaled for the nth time to ease the edgy feeling rushing into my veins.

I really need o make sure if this whoever-stranger is a "real human." But how?  Geeze! I am dead now!  Maybe he's s monster, a horrible monster tries to disguise into an adorable young man. If not, he's a murderer. A killer! And when his done with his evil plans, he will be going to eat my precious flesh and drink my elite blood.

Okay Zoey! That's ridiculous! But what if... HE IS?

I was having an internal battle with myself, just like a lunatic creature.

"....get something." And the stranger left, without looking back at me.

WHAT? What did he say? Get something? What he'll gonna get?

God! He will be going to get a keen knife to divide my body parts or a Pistol Dessert Gun to shoot my head or he will get a wild animals to devour me! Jesus! I felt the cold sweet running down to my cheeks, proceeding to my neck, crawling like a wild snake on my hands, until I was sweating all over my body.

I have to get up. I need to be strong. This is not the end of my story.

And so, I dragged myself to leave his place. I came out in a black tent.

Black tent? I guess I've already seen this before, but I refused to remember it further. My mind was so occupied where, when and how can I get out this mysterious space.

I am ready to walked away, when someone grabbed my right hand. I gasped in despair.

"Where are you going?" I frozed as I heard the monster's voice.

"Ple...please let me go!" I said pleasing him, trying to be possessed by get-your-ass-off-on-this-place-or-else-you-will-die-spirit.

"No! You stay here!" He said in an authoritative voice.

"No! Just let me go! Please, don't do anything to me." I keep on protesting, but he just held my wrist tighter.

"You're not going anywhere sunshine." He grabbed my shoulders to face him.

I screamed in horror. His touch was different and full of secrets.

"Don't! Please don't touch me!" I cried and became hysterical.

I've been such a good girl. I don't deserve this. Oh please!

Don't you dare lay your hands to me! Swear! Is this kind of joke? Well, this ain't funny! I was loosing myself the moment the stranger's hand touched my waist.

"Xian! Margarette! Matt! Where are you? Please help meeee!" Pleaseee!" As I screamed at the top of my lungs, finding my classmates restlessly.

My strength gradually flared up as I smelled an intoxicating scent. It made me nauseous. I want to vomit, but all I can do was to kneel down on the ground.

Again, my vision turned vague, black and I lost my consciousness.

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A/N:

So, what happened to Zoey? Oh my! May I hear your thoughts? Just so you know, this chapter is the grim shadow of the past of Zoey. Just a flashback! Chapter 4 would be somehow the continuation. Well, partly. Grammar errors will edit soon =))

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