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The Sandlot
FanfictionAriel's father died. She goes to live with his best friend. He lives next to an old baseball field. A bunch of boys go out there everyday to play ball. (Yeah-Yeah fic) Sorry about the bad description but I've never been good at writing descriptions.
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