So! I was reading through the story and saw how much stuff makes ABSOLUTELY NO SENSE. I was thinking that maybe I could re-write this story, and make it better. It'd be a separate story, of course, and I wanted your opinion, my fellow readers! It might be longer, shorter, same length, I have no idea. But I am a much better writer now, and my knowledge is much larger. (I wrote this last year before I got on Wattpad and I have improved A LOT) comment your opinion, please!
~ Strawberry-chan
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My Soul Still Stays (Jerza)
FanfictionErza Scarlet has a lung decease and has been in the hospital for the most part of her life. Somehow the doctors never found out what was her problem causing them not being able to treat it. After her old doctor retires, her new doctor is a young man...
