One direction DDM - Daddy daughter moments

Problem.

Hello people.

I see that many people are reading these preferences, which makes me so happy. BUT there are no votes. My questions for you guys are: 
-What can I improve? 
-Is there anything you dislike about the chapters? 

When I get votes/comments it inspires me to update this story, I have loads of requests, situations readers want me to write about. I usually spend 2-4 hours on updating, if no one enjoys it I should just stop updating and delete the story. I appreciate every single one of you who takes your time to read this and the chapters. I need votes and comments in order to get inspiration, you guys are the ones who give me inspiration. Now it's up to you. 
My intention is not to come off as rude or uptight, I just want to know what I can make better, I have plenty of reads 142K GUYS. I can't believe it. It's amazing. 

Have any questions/feedback/request don't be afraid to message me. 

Lots of love/ A.