One direction DDM - Daddy daughter moments

You call him dad (Zayn)

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Zayn: Your mother has been together with the One direction star Zayn for a few years. You and him weren't close at all, it was mostly "Hi what's up? Nothing, kay! Bye" you never had time to connect.
You were in your rebellious phase at the moment, you just did everything wrong, failed classes, started to party and the worst part ... You started smoking.
You were in a heated argument with your mother, you were rapidity pushing the cigarette in between your pink lips, inhaling the smoke.
"Seriously Y/N this has to stop! And it has to stop now!" Your mother said with a stern expression. You didn't listen to her, you just ignored her words.
"Hey! You aren't even listening, are you?" She said, this time her voice cracked at the end the sentence. I would be lying if I said that it didn't hurt me. Instead of showing any emotions I inhaled some smoke. Suddenly the cigarette was ripped away from me, to say I was shocked was a fact.
"Stop with this shit Y/N, smoking is not good, not at all. " Zayn said with a stern expression.
"You're smoking Zayn!" You said, your attitude was definitely bad. You were expecting Zayn to blow up and yell at you.
"Indeed, you are right Y/N. Can we make a deal honey?" Zayn asked with a hint of hope in his sparkling eyes. You were thinking about what he just had said.
"What kind of deal?" You asked, curiosity taking over. He chuckled.
"You're curious one, aren't you huh?" He teased. Unfortunately you didn't find it funny at all.
"Can you tell me for fuck's sake!" You snapped, which you regretted as soon as you said it.
"Y/N, I want you to quit smoking, and I also have to do it. So we can do it together huh?" He said, ignoring you swearing and attitude.
"I like the sound of it!" Your mum piped in. "You guys should definitely do it!" She added.
"You're right Zayn! I'll do it!" You said with a small smile. Zayn pulled you in to a hug immediately.
"That's my girl! If we can be nicotine free for two weeks, I'll take you to France for some shopping!" He said.
"Really?!" You squealed. He nodded and smiled at you.
"But, you'll also have to quit your attitude and swearing Missy!" He said strictly.
"Sure dad" you replayed, you didn't even realize what you had said until you saw you mother's eyes go wide.
"I'm so sorry Zay-" he cut you off by kissing your cheek.
"I don't mind it at all, in fact I'm very happy 'bout it!" He exclaimed, and from then on he was your dad