Tour With Blood On The Dance Floor (Nina's POV) [COMPLETED]

Moving from Oklahoma

(A:N I am skipping over the rest of the trip up north so I can get this story on the same page as Jayys POV)

The rest of our vacation up north was great. We went to mackinaw island, castle rock, fort Michaela Mackinac and got a bunch of mackinaw fudge. Now we are going back to Oklahoma to pack up ace's house. We just passed the Mackinac bridge. We have a 18 hour drive down to Oklahoma City. Ace is driving most of the way, then we will stop and get some food, after that I will drive the rest of the way. It's been six hours, we just crossed over to Indiana. Kaylie just woke up and said she was hungry. We found the closest town and stopped at McDonald's. we kept on driving while we ate our food. The car is mostly quiet for a few more hours. I took a hour nap, and Kaylie fell back to sleep to. I woke up to see we were half way through Illinois. I could tell Ace was getting really tired. "Babe pull over and let me drive." I said "ok, I will at this gas station up ahead, we need gas anyway." Ace said as he pulled in to the gas station. Before I got out to go pay for the gas I asked "does anybody want anything?" No" said both of them. I went in I got a large coffee so I could drive the rest of the way, Ace was pumping the gas. We still have a 12 hour drive until we're in Oklahoma. Ace feel asleep right away, Kaylie and I talked until she feel asleep again. I drove, listening to the radio on low so I wouldn't wake them up. It's around 10:00pm and we are half way through Missouri. 12 hours later we finally make it to Oklahoma City. Ace had woken up and told me how to get to his house, cause I haven't been there since I was 18. Everyone was awake and we were talking about random things.

Tell me what I can do to improve he story, If you comment first I will dedicate the next chapter to you. And if you haven read Jayy's POV yet you should go read it.

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