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Authors note: I don't know why but I don't feel as motivated for writing anymore.. mainly just writing this book, what chapter should I stop the book at? I want your guys' opinion on it, I'm thinking maybe chapter 50? Don't worry his ain't the last chapter:) but I want you guys to contribute to this, I have some questions at the end of the chapter and I really want you guys to answer them... and this chapter shall end in a cliff-hanger, one that reveals lots of info

Riley sighed, in her apartment, she layed on the chair watching new York's pedestrians, it hurt to think that she would do such a thing but there was no going back now.. was there?
She heard a knock on the door and opened it up to reveal a face she never thought she'd see in a lifetime
"Daniel?" Riley said shocked

"Listen, I know I should be in jail but they told me they'll be coming back for me, ok here is the thing, on the day before the court day... the cops are bringing me back to jail but I have to speak with you today, listen, I love you" Daniel says
Riley's eyes opened the widest she had opened them when she was in new York
"Really, so you murdered my boyfriend because you loved me, well maybe I don't love you back, and I loved my boyfriend and not you!" Riley screamed while trying to make sure she did not cry
"Listen Riley, your boyfriend wasn't good for you, he was turning you inside out and he was crazy! He was about to go to jail" Daniel said "And if I did not save you you' be torn to bits by him"
"He was rich!" Riley screamed
"BECUASE HE STOLE PEOPLE'S THINGS AND SOLD THEM ON EBAY!" Daniel screamed from the top of his lungs
"What!" Riley screamed
"And he was about to be got once he stole my wallet and I ordered it on Ebay, so listen, please just listen up, he was dangerous" Daniel said
"Now I know why you killed him" Riley said angry at her ex boyfriend "But why would you kill him! I mean that's illegal and that makes you no better than him!"
Riley was angry at Daniel and wanted to punch him so bad, but then Daniel said the one thing that made her made at her ex
"BECUASE CHARLIE WAS CHEATING ON YOU!" Daniel screamed...

Authors note: Short but scary, hehe:) XD I am actually liking this book more, so the ex was Charlie, wait did I not tell u guys that already? I've got no clue because when I am typing this my internet isn't working, I am typing this @ 8:36 AM on 18/01/2016 :) and this took me about a half hour to write, (I woke up at 6:00 but couldn't fall back asleep) so I've been writing since 7:00 AM for some of my books, just for a head up the next chapter will be posted on 01/02/2016 which is February First two-thousand -sixteen

So, on with the questions...

1. What chapter should I stop this book at?

2. Charlie? You're thoughts on the cliff-hanger?

3. What do you think will happen or want to happen in the next chapter?

4. Any ideas for upcoming chapters (No, seriously I'm about to have writers block on this book, that's why I did not have the motivation to write this chapter)



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