This is my first story so I'm sorry if it sucks. If you have any tips on how I can make it better like how I can improve my writing, please feel free to tell me. I hope you guys enjoy this book!
*important*
This was the first book I've ever wrote and looking back on it now that it's completed I notice so many mistakes and it makes me cringe. I'll be editing this now so if you are reading this after I the editing, ur welcome. If you are reading this after you already read the original none edited story, I'm sorry for my horrible writing and you can just ignore the changes I've made because it will not change the story line.
01- wrong numberto (***) ******** :
Shawn if you don't get here in 5 minutes I'm leaving without youfrom (***) ******** :
uh this isn't shawnto (***) ******** :
yIKES wrong numberto (***) ******** :
stupid fingers!!1!1!!to (***) ******** :
loving life :)))to (***) ******** :
wait who is this??from (***) ******** :
not shawn, that's whoto (***) ******** :
no shit. what's ur name?from (***) ******** :
nick, and you are?to (***) ******** :
I'm Luna :-)from (***) ******** :
like the moon?to (***) ******** :
yup :-))from (***) ******** :
stop making that faceto (***) ******** :
:-))to (***) ******** :
:-))to (***) ******** :
:-))))))))))from (***) ******** :
STOPto (***) ******** :
ok I'm done. shawns here, thx for entertaining me . TALK TO YA LATER!!from (***) ******** :
blocking you now byewow nick is so rude lol. this is horrible but whatever :)) thanks for reading!
YOU ARE READING
wrong number - n.r [IN EDITING]
Fanfiction"shawn if you don't get here in 5 minutes I'm leaving without you" "uh this isn't shawn" "yIKES wrong number" - completed March 28th, 2016