Tris (POV)
The school bell rang as Chris and I walked towards our lockers to collect all our books as it was our last day of dauntless school. Every young dauntless (people who finish dauntless school) get trained by a personal trainer for a month so that they will be ready to face the final initiation test.Today we all will to see who our trainer is going to be. The only thing people look forward at the last day school is hearing who the trainer will be and if they are boy or not and mainly if they are good-looking.
In contrast to the other girls, I don't really care who would be my trainer as long as they make me pass my initiation test to become a full dauntless member. Everyone are asked to go to the gym after school to find out the big news.
"I can't wait to see my trainer, i hope he is hot!" chris squealed as i roll my eyes and continue walking to our last lesson."whats our last lesson," i ask.
"Fitness training- how exciting!" she replies sarcastically.
As i enter the classroom i am welcomed by my teacher, Mrs Span who is meant to be a woman but because of her insane muscles and her dress code, everyone thinks she is a man instead!
"Ok class, settle down! As it is our last day today, we will be having a guest who will also be one of your trainers which you will find out who it will be after school." she continued, "He is here to teach you some traditional techniques used by the whole of dauntless faction. So please welcome Four."
All the girls started to squeal as a tall, muscular figure came in the room.He wore all black which showed off his muscles in the abdominal area and his hair was short and thick. As he came closer, i could see his eye colour more clearly- dark, so dark that it seemed black for a second but it wasn't, it was dark blue.He was quite attractive but his personality most surely did not sound attractive at all.
"As you already know," he started "You will be having your initiation test at the end of next month which is not long so i am here to just get you started on the fighting techniques you will be asked to perform" he continued "I am just getting you started with this but your personal trainers will personally teach you everything gand will tell you what to improve on as well, i cannot see how each and every individual of you are doing so you have to make the decision on listening to me carefully or we can take this lesson outside and just push you off the entrance of the dauntless headquarters."
The lesson continued with four demonstrating all the different techniques and at the end of the lesson, he let us have a go at the techniques. They were extremely hard which i did expect but not the hard. This lesson made me procrastinate about how i will do at the ionisation test.When i was trying, he came close to me and whispered "Your weak and don't have muscle." I found this extremely offensive and was about to crack up when the other girls came flying over and grabbed Four with them giving me a dirty look.I just ignored them and continued but soon lost the appetite from the devil's comment.
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It was the end of the lesson and chris and i made our way to the hall where our trainers will be announced but some stayed behind to talk to four, who just ignored them. I wanted to stay behind to continue where i dropped off but Chris pulled me with her as soon as she realised what i was going to do.
"What the hell,Chris?" I continued "Why did you grab me?, i was going to show that monster a piece of my mind until you just barged in"
"I don't want you to make another commotion about a stupid comment and just be quiet for once in your life,Tris. Its the last day!"She replied.
We are waiting in the hall as everyone quietened when tori entered the hall. " I know this will be a hard month for all of you but you should know that this training will pay it all off in the Initiation test." Tori continued."Make sure you take all of your training seriously but also to enjoy yourselves, anyways, here are your trainers." Tori than began to say a names which half of them i don't even recognise but I slowly began to pay attention of my name when tori announced " Tris, you will be with Four"
"Four!!!!!" I though.I can just feel my heart burst into tiny pieces, why him? anyone but not that stupid devil.
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Author note: Hey guys! Thank You for reading my fanfic, I know there is a lot of mistakes but plz comment saying what I should improve on so that I know. Writing about what I really love is so precious for me. I hope you enjoyed reading my first chapter of dauntless love.I know this chapter is kinda long and that it would become boring to read after a while so i am going to shorten it.
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Fiksi PenggemarTris and Four get off in the wrong foot so Four and Tris hate each other.However as they are forced to train together, they develop feelings for eachother. This won't last long as Eric gets jealous of Four and attempts to steal Tris away form Four...
