It was all dark and I was scared. I was sweating, I had no energy left, my whole body was shaking and trembling uncontrollably, and the floor was like ice under my thin dress. I was terrified for the world and my life. What will it become? I tried. I tried until I was trapped. Even then I didn't give up but now.... Now, I know it's the end, I know I can't try anymore. I gave up everything to save what you can't see but only dream and now it's gone. I heard a crash and things mumbling in a language I do not understand only two feet in front of me where I was hiding behind a box and I had to use all of the strength I had left to keep me from whimpering. They came closer and closer and then I heard a shot and I lost my last nerve. I screamed.
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