My STUPID Journal

PLZ HELP

For English, we are writing a poem. It is due tomorrow and I'm stressing out about it. Since I have no talent whatsoever, I need someone who can maybe fix my "poem" up a it. PLZ?!?

At first glance,
She seems like a rebel.
She was like a box,
Mysterious in her own way.
Once you got to know her,
She became entertaining,
As funny as a clown.
She was like a match,
That just needed a spark.
But I thought,
I was boring.
As dull as a prison cell wall.
I thought,
People thought I was lonely,
Just a girl.
I thought I was reserved,
Keeping things to myself.
I thought I was as quiet as a mouse,
Never making a sound.
Oh,
How I thought wrong!

GUYS PLZ HELP!