Short stories

The Broken Girl

there were three friends, two were guys, the other a girl. They all knew how to play a specific instrument. The girl's name was Lorella. The one guy's name was Ted, and the last guy's name was Darius. Now Ted liked Darius, but Lorella liked Ted. You can barly imagine the pain that Lorella went through when she found out that Ted was with Darius. She hid her tears, cuts, and sadness through a smile, make-up, and bracelets or long sleeves. No one noticed the sadness in her eyes, no one heard her cry, because they never paid attention to her looss of weight. She quit eating, saying she already ate, and when they asked her to go swimming, she declined, making up an excuse. After so long, Ted and Darius became distant towards her. Her family never treated her right, but she kept up her act, until one day she ended up in the hospital. She tried commiting suicide, and she succeeded. She wrote a suicide not that said;

Dear Ted,

I loved you while you loved Darius. I saw that you two were happy, and it hurt like hell, but I pretended to be okay. Don't blame yourself, it's not your fault for being the way you are. Although, when you two pushed me out of your lives because you were too busy to talk to me, it hurt even more. Although, I should've understood, but I couldn't.

Dear Darius,

Please take great care of Ted. Don't let him do what I did. I was tired of the pain. My "family" never treated me right. Smile at my funural, eventually you'll get over the pain of my death. 

At her funural, both guys cried, blaming themselves, but what they didn't know, was that she was still alive, somewhat, that is......

_____________ so, should i make this into a big book by itself, or nah?