review #40: Playland(Niall Horan)

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by laly13

by laly13

author: iheartediting1234

rating: PG

read it if: you like carnivals

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plot:

Welcome to Playland! An amusement park located in Vancouver, Canada. Every single year from May to September, Playland is open to children of all ages to come in with their family and friends and have a great time. With the smell of cotton candy and rollercoaster grease in the air, Playland has served many happy families over the past 100 years. Many rides have come and gone, many children have grown up with the tradition of coming to the park every single summer. One of these children is 18 year old Autumn Sanders. She has lived in this city for her whole life, and she is now working at Playland to pay for college.

So where does One Direction come into the story? Well after their final show at Rogers Arena in downtown Vancouver, they decide to celebrate their 2 week upcoming tour break with a day at Playland. But what started as a friendly day of riding rollercoaters and eating mini donuts turns into a day of tragedy when the boys get stuck on the 225 feet high attraction known as "The Atmosfear".

Word gets around the tiny amusement park quickly and Autumn runs to the boys' rescue. Luckily the odds were in her favour that day, and got the band and other riders down to the ground safely. But that doesn't mean it won't happen again, especially since now Niall has an interest in this Autumn girl, and decided to stay in Vancouver while the other boys go home to visit their families. What could possibly happen in 2 weeks? Could they fall in love? Or will it all come crashing down just like The Atmosfear almost did...?

review:

Like the review #39,this is just starting,so let's do another "prediction edition"

This story is about a carnival in Canada called Playland(if i'm not wrong,the carnival's real) where the boys gets stuck in a really tall rollercoaster, a girl that works there rescues them, and a relationship beteween her and Niall may start soon.

This story remembers me of a carnival here in Puerto Rico(that's where I live) called "La Feria the Park"(the carnival the park). It's open in November thru January,and I went for the first time last year on my birthday,and it was a lot of fun.Sadly 1D wasn't there haha,but I had fun anyways

I think this will be a cute story too, but not very cliche like "The Back Up Plan"(check review #39 fo more). If the carnival is more shown then it might pass,because I love carnivals,I love to know more from stuff around the world, and stories where the main set is a carnival doesn't appear everyday

With a good plot,good grammar,well made starting development... I recommend it if the "read it if" suits you

note to author:

If you're reading this,thanks for making this. The thematic remembers me of that good birthday I had(hope I can go again this year),so it's a plus to be likable to me. Try to follow my advice,but without losing your writer's spark. Keep writing and take care ;)

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