Review #81: Back For You(Louis Tomlinson)

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by laly13

Dedicated to LouisHipster

by laly13

author: LouisHipster

rating: PG-13

read it if: you like evil 1D girlfriends or stories about best friends reuniting after years of separation

plot:

Skylar and Louis were once best friends,but when one fight between her parents ends up with her in America,what happens to Louis? When their friendship breaks apart,can they mend it back together? What happens with Louis and Skylar when they're forced to meet up again? Will she hate him forever? Or can Louis get his best friend back,and more?

review:

Wake up! It's time for pros and cons!!

The first pro of this is the evil Eleanor. Like I've said before mean girls are always fun to see and always gets a strong reaction from us readers;and seeing is El, the sweetest girlfriend in fanfics, makes this more original and interesting

Other pro is that this doesn't use the cliche "they stopped being best friends because he became famous and forgot about her". Come on, the guy has to have a severe Alzheimer or something to forget someone you haven't seen in 2 or 3 years. Mini spoiler of why these 2 stopped being besties: she moved to America and a year later of her movement she heard something hurtful from him. Not spoiling what happened in the fight, but it was pretty original

The first con of this is that this ended in a cliffhanger and the author continued it in a sequel. The cliffhanger was good, but the topic is kind of a weak one that suits better in the first book

And the other one is the excess of teasing. Teasing is good because it helps the story avoid going in the rushed development path, but always making something to not make the obvious couple something official at first is annoying and then kind of boring

With a nice plot, nice grammar, kind of slow to read, awesome villain... Read it if you're bored and want to pass time reading anything

note to author:

if you're reading this, thanks for making and recommending this. This isn't the eight wonder of the world, but it isn't the trashiest story ever either. Soon I'll read the sequel and review it, so watch out hehe. Keep writing and take care ;)

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