fanfiction reviews by Laly13 Vol.1(Requests Closed)

review #13: I Wish(One Direction)

author: EmskiiB97

rating: G

read it if: you like fanfics about 5 couples at the same time(5x the cheesiness and drama)

 plot:

This is the story of Cosette, Emylee, Khloey, Estelle and Cyrah, five typical teenage girls who's life is turned upside down when Cosette's childhood sweetheart moves to their town with his friends. They experience first love, first heartbreak and a whole lot more but will this end up as a happy ending? Follow their story and see where they end up after all they go through...

review:

I don't know how I found this type of stories a little interesting, they're too very cliché  and there's like 10 povs that you have to understand carefully like the movies played in school for an assignment, and those makes me go dizzy like heck.

This story is unusually usual. Unusual because most of fanfics are focused on one or two(the case of love triangles) of the boys, but usual because when there are 5 couples at the same time it gets extra cheesy, and what most of fanfics need? cheesiness(don't know if I wrote that right)

With a decent plot, good grammar, good sequence of events but filler development and the girl's name remembers me of my own name(since my real name is weird and unique hehe)... I recommend it only if you are starting here but you have read like 3 or 5 fanfics by now,or you're a romantic who never gets tired of cheesiness, or you're simply bored.

note to author:

If you're reading this,thanks for making this. This story isn't captivating(in general this type of fanfics doesn't have the "Great factor"),but in the time I read it it got me entertained for a while and it helped me a little in the reading fast problem I have. Hope this review didn't hurt you. Keep writing and take care ;)

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