author: TheLoveWeShare
rating: PG-13
read it if: you like nerdy Niall
plot:
Kiya Martin is the queen bee of Chesterfield High School. She's captain of the volleyball team and cheer squad along with being the current student body president. In Kiya's eyes life couldn't be any better, but her entire life is turned upside down when her parents spring some extremely unwanted news on her. They're moving to Ireland, Mullingar to be exact.
Niall Horan is the smartest kid at Mullingar High School, but unfortunately he's also the kid that gets bullied the most. Why? He doesn't know. Its like he existed to do the popular kids' homework and be the football team's personal punching bag. What happens when Mullingar High's newest student saves Niall from his daily beatdown? Will they become friends or something more?
review:
A mega short pros and cons coming up!
Pros:
-Niall's a nerd
-there's a love triangle
-she made a surprising election
-Nandos is replaced by McDonalds
-cliffhanger ending
Cons:
-Niall liked the girl but it was 1%-almost zero-evident
- Harry's sudden change of attitude=too irreal
- pretty cliche(popular girl with nerd=100% predictable)
- the development felt rushed
With a cliche but well made plot, nice grammar, kind of very short( I finished it before I could start liking liking it)... Read it if you're obsessed with nerdy 1D
note to author:
If you're reading this, thanks for making this. This isn't the eight wonder of the world, but I want to read the sequel;if you have it I'll check it soon, and if you don't, what are you waiting for? Keep writing and take care ;)
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