Minecraft Survival

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Mitch's POV

I quickly get out of bed and rush outside. I run towards the direction of the scream. I ran as fast as I could. I eventually arrived at a river, with my feet in pain. I look at the river and see a brown, furry man...I think it's a man...I can't really tell ( I bet most of you know who it is!). I reach my hand out to grab the...man? And he grabs on. I pull him up and he is panting.

"Thank you biggums..." he says exhausted.

"Who are you and why were you in there?" I asked him curiously, as we sat down.

"Well... I'm Jerome and I'm a bacca!" he said smiling.

"And why were you in there?" I asked wondering what a bacca was.

"Well, I woke up a few days ago, and I was in the middle of a desert. I found a village and tried hiding in there for the night. I found a place to sleep, and I had a rest. When I woke up, the villagers were there with swords and torches. They thought I was a monster! I'm no monster, I'm a bacca! Well they chased me off and I ran for what seemed to be years. I finally arrived at the mouth of the river. I thought they were way behind me, so I was taking a breathe, when suddenly a villager pushed me into the river!"

"That's terrible!" I said

"I know..." He replied

"Well you can stay with me! We don't need anyone else. We can explore the world!" I said smiling

"Really!" He said looking at me with bright eyes.

"Yep...Let's go...What did you call me earlier?" I said

"Biggums" He answered.

"Well... Let's go biggums!" I said standing. "I'm Mitch by the way"

"I'm Jerome...Like I said earlier." he responded