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Virginity

This is an uncomfortable topic, but I'm just going to talk about this.

Loosing your virginity to this pop star.

Okay, usually loosing your virginity in a story goes along these lines:

'why u nervous'

'leyum I'm a virgin'

'o dats k lets fuck'

'lol this doesn't hurt at all'

'that was the best sex eva ily'

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So, if you didn't know already loosing your virginity usually doesn't give you the opportunity to have an amazing time. But in fanfics out there they have this hardcore sex and it's just so fucking amazing.

When you loose your virginity, you usually bleed. And it hurts girls usually until their second or third time. That's when they start to get some kind of pleasure out of it.

Okay.

Just think about that before your characters 'first time' is the most amazing sex ever.