Damn Mia, back at it again with the late reviews.. anyways i'm going to try to review everyones oc today and then get straight into writing a new story so lets go!
Name: Luna Rae Koen
nice nice
Creepypasta name: Little LadyCreepypasta catchphrase: Such A Shame
Okay this is pretty good, I've never really seen anyone use that name before
Age: 19
Meh, at least she isn't 16 or something
Weapon: Blackjack and brass knuckles
cool, cool.
Looks: Short brown hair, freckles that spread across nose and cheeks, hazel eyes, 5'6, 120 pounds.
aw, cute!
Sexuality: Lesbian
nice!
Illnesses: Schizophrenia and PTSD (The reason she has PTSD is explained in the story.)
woah woah woah okay lets look this over. So these are things that should be handled with extreme caution. These aren't things you should add just to make your oc more "insane" or because you think they're cool. I haven't read the story yet, but if you are going to use these, please be careful with these things!
Rate: 7/10 so far. Once I read the story, this might change
- Mia
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