How to not make your Creepypasta oc into a mary sue

please read!!

hey guys! so i want to start off by saying
wow
this book was actually a fucking trainwreck.
my advice i gave to y'all wasn't even that good uh so i'm sorry about that? but i did write this book in 2015 so i didn't know any better, sorry!

i will admit i went waaaaay to easy on most of the reviews. i didn't want to hurt anyones feelings at the time so yikes.

i'm not sure if i'll continue this book or not. i know a lot of you like it and i know i don't even write all that much and honestly i don't write because i'm absolutely terrified of criticism aha.

i might review some more ocs, but don't expect me to go easy on you now. you asked for a review, therefore i will give an honest review. so send them in my dm's and i might review it!!!

bye! ♡

- Mia