Timothy Jackson (Review)

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by Vinsmoking

by Vinsmoking

mm hello I am back at it again with the oc reviews. I just got out of school for summer so now I should have a lot of free time to review ocs. Lets begin.

Real Name-Timothy JacksonAlias-Labyrinth KeeperGender-Male

Thank god, a male. Seeing a male creepypasta oc is so rare now tbh. The alias is actually pretty creative I really like it!

Age-19Appearance- A lanky, thin boy with shaggy, wavy brown hair that goes to the middle on his neck. His eyes are a light storm gray. He wears a gray sweater that is striped on the lower half, the stripes are thin and are blue and green. His jeans are tattered from falling in the maze. Wears black, dirty Saucony running shoes. A few pink and blue anklets on his left leg. His teeth are a bit crooked as well as his smile. A small scar on his upper lip from falling off a tree when he was younger. Tim also wears a bandana to cover his mouth and nose when he is in dusty places.

ooo, crooked teeth and a crooked smile!! A notable flaw!! his appearance is good, I don't see anything wrong with this right now.

History-

https://www.wattpad.com/229948071-if-there%27s-nothing-in-the-darkness-then-why-do-you

I like this story. He actually has a reason to basically "snap" and go insane unlike most creepypastas who just go insane because of bullying. Shit, if I were stuck in a maze and couldn't get out, I would too!I really, really like the idea of him not just going around the world to kill people, but only killing people who fall down into the labyrinth. I'm just a little curious, why didn't he kill the man who told him to kill the girl instead? I know i'm overthinking this but i'm just curious. If he killed the man, he wouldn't have to worry about killing other people. Was he just physically unable to do so? Could he only kill weak people instead? Who knows!Just one more thing, Is it common for people to fall into the labyrinth? If so, why didn't the man have other killers down there? Were they all too scared to do so causing him to rid of them?

Weaknesses-Heights, small cramped spaces, social events, being the center of attention.

This looks pretty decent.

Agility-Speed: 7/10 Strength: 5/10Smart: 9/10Flexibility: 3/10

I fucking suck at stats honestly but this looks pretty good. I can see why his smarts are that high because he can easily escape labyrinths- except the one he's already in- but still! His strength basically answers my question.

Theme Songs-Labyrinth- Oomph! [make sure to get the English version]Follow You- Bring Me The HorizonUma Thurman- Fall Out BoyMeltdown- Rob Gasser ft. John Caddock

honestly theme songs don't really matter. I suggest trying to avoid adding theme songs because no one really listens to them anyways and no one really cares tbh.

Orientation-Bisexual and Biromantic

I mean that doesn't really matter now because he's stuck forever. ha. but that's still okay to add.

That was a pretty good oc. I really liked him a lot! Overall, he seemed really well made!

Rate: 9/10

Now, time to get to everyones ocs today. Wish me luck.

- Mia