Harry Potter- Chapter 1: October 31, 1991

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(WORD FOR WORD OF THE ORIGINAL) (also i don't know why its 1991)

do not own Harry Potter

I am writing this as sort of a rewrite/new version of the Harry Potter chronicles, I have read peoples reviews about it, grammar's lousy, Hayden is too common of a name, more original plots; so I deleted Harry Potter Adventures (I AM SO SORRY) and fused it with this and am experimenting with a new idea. I want to write a ORIGINAL story with ORIGINAL ideas, like the Explorers map, Harry's parents NOT being complete bastards, Less bashing, more adventure, less perfect Harry. Harry's parents wont be featured as much as in the Chronicles where they were in nearly every chapter, this will be Harry centric

Basic Story Outline:

Harry- He will be abandoned, but not hated by his parents. He will not be a perfect, God-like, filthy rich, extremely famous, and politically active person. He will have money, but it won't be close to the family fortunes of the Potters, Malfoys, or Blacks. He will be very Powerful and smart, but without him hating everyone. He will be HORRIBLE at politics and business, so he won't rule the world and be rich as God. He will mostly adventure and learn magic from a young age. Will be good at Transfiguration, Defense, Charms, Potions and basically every magical subject, but WILL NOT be perfect, (he will have faults, if you would like to PM me with possible faults for Harry then please go ahead) Also Harry is straight, NO SLASH, already have pairings picked out, all straight. (I have nothing against gay people, I just can't write them for some reason)

Dumbledore- Very cliché, Manipulative Dumbledore, will know Harry is the real boy-who-lived but will tell everyone it is Harrison. Won't have much of a active role till later.

Lily- Loving mother forced to abandon her favored child for ten years, She will favor Harry because they have more in common (Like in the Chronicles). But won't appear in too many chapters till much later. Won't have a active role till later

James- Father who loves Harry but prefers Harrison, will not hate Harry, and I hope to avoid bashing. Won't have a active role till later

Harrison- Harry's older twin brother who is believed to be the Boy-Who-lived, he will dislike borderline hate Harry because Lily favors Harry over Harrison, won't be a HUGE brat like in most stories but will be somewhat arrogantly and self-assured. HE will be the oldest and Heir to Potter, which is not common in most stories. He will be good at DADA but no where close to Harry. Won't have a active role till later.

Other Characters: Will have many OC characters but not many will actually appear more then once or twice, some like Bill Donovan will be used later and will become a main character. I plan for Harry to have a sister, but I still need to think of a name for her. (My choices are Glory, Kate, Jessica, or you can suggest a different one, no Rose, it's cliché)

Harry will be left in Orphanage (cliché but must be done for story), run away (More cliché) and meet Merlin (NOT SO Cliché, I think), who will give him the Map (MY IDEA! Probably the best EVER!) and other supplies, like a way to travel, then Harry will travel, help people, Fall in love (WAY WAY LATER), make friends (LATER). If you would like to submit a idea for a adventure then go ahead, I am open to all ideas, it can be anywhere and involve anything, I can find a way to fit it in my story.

Trying to avoid Clichéness so if any of you people have any ideas feel free to PM me or EMAIL me or whatever.

This first chapter is basically the same as the Harry Potter chronicles, but main storyline will, of course, be different.

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