The Life of a Commander (TFP)

Chapter 10

Chapter 10

I hovered in my jet mode as Shockwave climbed onto me an wrapped his hands around my nose with an iron grip, causing me to grunt.

"Are you ready?" I was already ready for him to get off of me.

"Affirmative."

I took off, not wasting any time. As soon as I busted through the roof, blaster fire and the fire of A.A. guns were all around us.

"Soundwave, I require a space bridge immediately!"

The green vortex once again appeared in front of me. An A.A. gun hit my wing. we went flipping through towards the Nemesis.

"Fragging pit! That hurt!"

We tumbled across the flight deck, and I transformed on the first impact, causing Shockwave to roll and skid away from me.

Pain blurred my vision, and my wing was smoking. footsteps were pounding. A couple of seconds passed and I saw five Megatrons and Knockouts standing over me.

"Megatron...," I said weakly, "I bring news of our home." I coughed. "Cybertron...lives..."

The warlord's optics widened while Knockout was giving orders.

"Get them both to the med bay immediately!"

I blacked out.

Beep...beep...beep.

I groaned and opened my optics. I was in the medical bay. Knockout and Megatron were close by. Shockwave was on a berth next to me. The children were in the containers where I had left them. they were watching with interest what was going on in the room.

I tried to sit up, but abandoned the idea when I felt a shooting pain. "My aching wing!" I moaned.

The two standing Cybertronians were at my side in a flash.

"Easy there, Knockout cautioned. "You took a nasty hit to your wing. What got you?"

"Autobot anti air gun." I signaled for them to whisper.

"Autobots now populate Cybertron?" Megatron questioned.

"Yes. I'm unsure of the numbers. They've claimed the planet for their own. They shoot at any Decepticon that comes hen send a hunting party after them. Shockwave said Ultra Magnus leads them."

"Interesting. Are there any other Decepticons there?"

"Unknown. I just got shockwave and got out. He'll be able to tell you more once he wakes. How long was I out?"

"An hour at the most," Knockout responded. "I wonder if Optimus Prime knows about Cybertron."

"Even if he did," Megatron began, "he doesn't have access to a space bridge or the technology needed to build one. He's stuck on Earth unless one opens from Cybertron."

"As unlikely as it is that that will happen, I strongly recommend the human children have no knowledge of it either. At least, not until Shockwave works his magic."

"They will know nothing," the gray Cybertronian declared. "Shockwave will take them to the lab to begin his work when he wakes."

"Shouldn't be much longer. He didn't sustain as many injuries as Nightstrike." The medic walked around my berth to Shockwave's and examined his vitals. "All we can do now is wait."

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9 chapters in a day!  That's because everything I just posted is the vast majority of what I currently have typed.  Everyone that sees this, please help me out with something.  I posted it on the conversation thing on my profile but I'm pretty sure no one looks at that.  So, I will also put it here.  I'm going to write another story in my free time at school.  It's going to be about transformers, obviously.  

Things that need to be considered for the story:

1. Bayverse or Prime?

2. human or transformer for the main character?

3. Autobots or Decepticons for the main faction?

4. Earth or Cybertron?

5. Time period(if Bayverse(before or after which movie))

(I refuse to write about anything that makes no sense in a Transformers story.  e.g. A human with wings and superpowers, a human or transformer turning into an animal (whether it be a transformer (mechanical one) or not), mash-ups of any kind- avengers and transformers for example.  I realize others have written about those things, but I'm not going to.  Those things just bug me to no end.)

There's a lot that goes into planning a story.  That having been said, if I don't get a response on this by the time I wake up, and I HIGHLY doubt that I will, I'm just going to think of a story and write that.  If I don't and someone still wants to leave ideas in the comment section, I will gladly consider them for the next book.  I believe that while I'm going to write a story in school, I will also write one out of school while I'm at home.  I will use the ideas left here for that, which will make us all happy.  I get to be creative, and you guys get to help me out and participate in coming up with ideas for a new story.  Yay!  We all get to be creative!  Three cheers for creativity! 

Stay jazzy! xoxo