Cliche Or Not Critiques

Info (CLOSED FOR CATCHUP)

THANK YOU FOR ALL THE SUBMISSIONS. IM GOING TO TRY TO CATCH UP SO FORMS ARE CLOSED FOR NOW. IF YOU ENTER I WILL IGNORE YOU

I will read around 3 chapters of your story, maybe more and maybe less depending on how much I like it. In those 3 chapters, you're going to have to convince me that it's worth to keep reading.

In the critique, you'll be judged on

First Impression: What was the first thing that popped into my mind once I saw your cover and read your blurb?

Hook: If I didn't have to read 3 chapters of your story, and I was a normal reader, would I click on your story and start reading it? Are your cover, title and summary interesting? Are the first few paragraphs great? I have the attention span of a mayfly on drugs, so if you don't have me hooked within the first few paragraphs, I drop the book. Don't even give it a second chance. So if you manage to trap me in your story, you'll be pretty good for other, more dedicated readers.

Plot: Is the plot itself interesting, unique and does it make sense?

Language: I'm not a Grammar Nazi
nor an editor, therefore I'm not going to bite your head off if you miss a comma. My rule basically is if I can understand what you're trying to say, you're good.

Characters: This is an important one. If I don't like or sympathise with the characters I'm supposed to relate to, I'm out.

How Cliche Your Story Is: on a scale of 1-10. 1 being completely original and 10 being a carbon copy of another story(ies).

How Well You Dealt With The Cliches: also on a scale of 1-10. Just because something's been done before doesn't mean you can't put your own original spin on it and make it interesting or hilarious.

Overall Grade: A to F. F is fail, A is awesome. Pretty simple.

These reviews are FREE because I don't have a social life and this is what I do for fun.

Rules
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You can request as many stories of yours as you want

-Don't be rude. If you disagree with my opinion, just don't change anything

-I'm no professional author, just a reader that's tired of overused ideas, so take my critiques with a pinch of salt.

-If you get offended easily or are very protective of your story, TURN AWAY NOW. I'm not going to spare your feelings by sugercoating anything, because that's not going to make your story or writing better.

Now that those people are gone, here's the form:

Title:

Genre:

How original do you think your story is?:

Request away!