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- Sarena
Maria
Oh joy, I'm in love. After all those boys and their horrible way of rejecting me...the way their yellow teeth glinted in the sunlight, their eyes like pieces of muddy rock, their unruly spider-infested hair...but those are from darker times. My fragile heart has been broken and crudely repaired too many times, and I've finally found a way to rid myself of such addicting poisons. I love boys no longer, but something far superior, something gentler and incapable of breaking my heart: hamsters. They can't betray me! Now, my heart races at the sight of their beady little eyes. I've given my new hamster a name: Ethan. The name of a beautiful boy I used to dream of. Now that he's probably gone forever with some slutty girl named Ashley, I am free to dream of my furry friends in peace.
Maria gazed lovingly at the little fuzzy ball, staring into its black, glinting eyes through the plastic of the hamster ball. It raised a sharp paw in reply, eyes flashing with distain and anger. To an innocent bystander who may or not have been there, it would've seemed to say, "GET AWAY FROM ME, YOU FWEEK! IM NOT YOUR BOYFRIEND, YOU GOT THAT? STOP STARING AT MEEE!!!" but Maria paid him no mind. The love she felt now is was the only love she planned to feel, and hopefully the only love she would ever have again. She was sinking into a hamster-induced bliss when Mark, her brother, barged in. She sighed darkly as she watched Mark and his girlfriend Candace dart around in her room, Mark searched furiously for Maria's makeup, and Candace threateningly brandishing a mascara wand. "YOU GUYS, GET OUT." Maria shrieked, seriously pissed that they had to interrupt her 'moment' with the hamster. Candace was obviously very shocked, and froze, while Mark spotted her compact in the corner of her washroom. Candace dragged him out after he snatched the makeup from Maria's counter and together they left, leaving Maria in the quiet darkness of her room. Just the way she liked it.
Maria glared at the door that Mark and Candace had just closed, wondering how Candace could ever play with her practically gay brother and dolling him up with makeup and whatnot, and yet still go out with him. It was a mystery. She lay down on her bed, thinking about how clueless Candace and all those other girls drooling over Mark were. He fell in love with the oddest things, and Candace would most definitly be dumped in two days, even if they were going out for a month now. (WOOT A RECORD FOR HIM!) Hamsters were so much more reliable. She was so grateful to be the normal one in the family..
Candace
Okay, so Maria just kicked us out, with that whole uber-bitch act. That so wasn't like her, but her hamster was KYUUTE!! Mark managed to find MORE makeup (who knew maria was such a girly girl?) but if we stayed at his place, then he'd be tempted to run in Maria's room again and steal more, so the obvious choice was to go MY PLACE! and you know what we do when we're at my house, right?
DRESSUP TIME!
Mark and Candace raced into Candace's closet, Candace's eyes sparkling as they both sat down on the blue cushions in front of the wall of mirrors, with a bunch of makeup on Candace's lap.
"okay, so first, I wanna look like Barbie." squealed Mark.
"Gotcha." Candace squealed back, grinning at Mark while dabbing the liquid foundation on his face.
Next was eyeliner..then the blush..then the lig gloss.
"Mark, cotton candy flavoured lip gloss!" Candace leaned in and as she was about to apply the lig gloss, Mark kissed her firmly on the lips.
"About Time!!" Candace thought, and kissed him back.
*20 seconds later*
Mark snatched the lip gloss from Candace's limp hand and pulled away from her, furiously appying thick layers of the pink gloop. Candace sighed. Maybe Maria was right, maybe Mark was gay..but no. This was HER Mark she was thinking of. He couldn't be gay. It was just a phase that all girls had already gone through, and some boys have to go through to reach full maturity. Yes, that's the right theory..
"Sleepover?" Mark inquired, smacking his lip glossed lips.
Candace attempted to smile. "Sure. I'll go shower here, and you can in the other bathroom."
*30 minutes later*
Candace waited. And waited. And waited still.
*Another 30 mins later*
"AHH!!!"
Candace shoots up from her circular blue bed to find...Mark standing in front of her mirror, still screaming.
So what do you think happened? Is Mark gay? Does Maria have serious issues? Do you have any advice that may help the two from their teen-life crisis? The next part will be posted soon...
<3 Lucy
PS. r there any shiny-lovers like me out there who r obsessed with shiny things? SHINY??? SHINY???
PPS. r there any people with advice on how to cure shiny-loving? or how to be not so obsessed with it?
PPPS. r there anyone out there who think im normal, just like sarena?
PPPPS. is there anyone out there who actually likes this story so far? and have ideas on what to call it?
