The Shrine Keeper And The Demon

Literal Hell Chapter 7

I carried the demon back to the shrine my heart pounding like a sledge hammer. My breath came out as a raspy tune my breath being hitched, I could only wonder what was Nats- no this demon doing to me?
Anyway even with him in his human form he was as heavy as bricks. I could only sulk in frustration as I came to the stairs of the shrine, suddenly it felt like climbing a mountain. After finally reaching the top of the stairs I was coated in sweat and collapsed right on the stop my heart pounded even harder the sun burning through me as I felt so weak.
I finally pushed myself up wiping the sweat off my fore head as I picked him up once more carrying inside. I let him rest on my old cot as I left to the pond along with my old rag soaking it in the cool water, I came back soon after resting the cloth on his forehead sitting by his side.
My hand found its way to rest in his hair my fingers twirling his pink hair which was surprisingly quite soft. Before I knew it I found my self laying against his chest as darkness took over me.
But when I opened my eyes I wasn't laying against his chest, no, I was in hell.

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