Is Your OC A Mary Sue

Starshine

(Some is in bold print because wattpad is an asshole also an % means start of a sentence for me*

Name: Princess Starshine Crystal, but her sister calls her Star, or, when she wants to annoy her, Shi-shi.

AGAIN WITH THE ROYALTY LINE GOSH DAMNIT.

Age: 13

... SHE'S INCOMING THe SUE AGE.

Race:Alicorn

...thats original except the othER 10 MILLION ALICORN oc's

Relationships: She doesn't have any friends, besides a handful of crystal ponies she nods in passing.  This isn't because no one likes her, but the fact that Starshine is simply a very private pony.  Besides that, there is Princess Cadence (Mother), Shining Armor (father), and Princess Flurry Heart (sister).

Why. Okay I get private pony. BUT WHY A WELL KNoWN PRINCESS.  I SWeAR THESE PONIES HAVE 100 CHILDREN AT ONCe. *Blows up into steam*.

Appearance: Coat is relatively dark shade of purplish pink.  Mane is in wavy clumps of very light and dull pink and lavender.  Blue eyes, bark blue, small framed, rounded glasses.

Cotton. Candy.also is her hair like matted. Don't put the word clumps.

Cutie mark: Currently, she's a blank flank, but I have a vague idea of what I want it to be.

%So you mean to tell me a teenage pony whose is 13 doesn't a cutie mark yet. Ok. Still figuring out who she wants to be. Cool. Okay.

Personality: She's an introvert, preferring to seek her own company rather than that of others.  She delves herself into her studies in order to discover what kind of magic she excels in, and is therefore princess of.  Whenever she is required to attend a formal event, she plasters on a half-smile and tries to get out of there as soon as possible.  Star holds fierce determination and perseverance, but she is rather close-minded.  She has a habit of viewing others with contempt, generally reserved for those she believes are naive, or simple.  However, she is surprisingly loyal, especially when Flurry Heart is involved.  After all, she is her best friend, and, much as she denies it, she isn't sure what she's do without her.

Introvert. INTROVERT. INTROVERT. TOO MANY oc's WHO ARe INTROVERTED. Special snowflakes. Okay slow your horses. Once does not just simply become a princess of magic. Like twilight did but she went through training,adventures, And figuring herself out and approved by celestia. Meanwhile your oc is stuck in a study not even trying. The rest is good.

Backstory: When Starshine was born, her wings weren't like that of a normal alicorn, or even that of a pegasus.  They were incredibly small, and it became evident that she would never be able to fly.  Still, Cadence and Shining promised to love her the same as Flurry Heart, who already had flight skills akin to that that of a normal adult pegasus.  Star's disability bothered her when she was younger, but she's come to accept it, and now it barely even crosses her mind.
"Sheltered in the castle for much of her young life, she didn't venture out much unless forced to, and even then, she pretty much ignored all the other fillies.  She idolized her sister and mother when she was younger, like all well-brought-up small children do, until her views branched off from theirs.  At that point, Star began to disregard the two, which morphed into disrespect bordering on rude.  Eventually, she would tell anyone who would listen that, "I want to become like Celestia and Luna.  Their work has real meaning, unlike Cadence and Twilight.  I mean, how much power can something as abstract and debatable as love and friendship possibly hold any power?  It's just propaganda to disguise the fact that they aren't actually doing anything.  Seriously, when was the last time you saw my mom doing work?"  Word of this eventually reached Cadence, and in response, she sent Starshine (Along with Flurry Heart, who begged) to Ponyville and the Mane Six to learn about friendship and its importance.

God damn that's a big Backstory. Alright if her wings are useless then WHY DOES SHE HAVE THEM. It doesn't make her less of a sue. If you just wanted to Be a alicorn for alicorn then do it right. BE A UNICORN. She sent her to to the mane six. WJSJEJEJSJAJENDNWODNDN

Mary sue scale:60%