My Brother Loves Me than He Should {H.S.} (DISCONTINUED)

Chapter 13~ Vacation and Makeover

Hey guys, I've graduated from high school  with a 3.1 GPA and now I'm off to college with my no-license-having-ass. I'm terrified to drive, but I always manage to find a way.
Anyway, I have noticed that the views on my story have gone done each chapter and it's only because I'm not really consistent with my writing, but I can makeup for it since I'm not being forced to get a job during this summer. I can have time to write this story and the only problem that I'm contemplating is where am I going with this story. I'm trying to figure that out, I don't know when I'm going to end it and I don't know how I am developing the romance, the romance seem a bit off.

For the people that are still reading this story, comment to let me know what I need to do in order to develop the story a bit better. That would help me so much.

Well, enough of that, on to the story.

It's coming to the end of the month now and Harry still hasn't gotten his friend to cut his hair. He said he would but every time he's about to call, he chickens out. LaRay understands why he doesn't want to, but he's let the gorgeous locks get all matted and unkempt. He needs to have a good fresh start with the hair, but LaRay is going to give him a bit more time before she decides to confront him about it. Today is relaxation day for the both of them because they are planning a little vacation for the beach, Harry loves the beach, mostly the ocean because the waves can be calming and even the hotel pools and hot tubs. LaRay called his mom, sister, and father while Harry called his friends. Of course, everyone they called could make it. Harry called the hotel they planned on going to and booked the hotel room for a good week. LaRay made sure that Harry booked a hotel where they can have Smile there, she doesn't really trust leaving him with a total stranger or putting him in a doggy day care.

After making sure that everything is prepared and set, Harry decided that they should go ahead and pack up their bags so they can get ready to leave. They're not leaving today, they're leaving Saturday, a day where everyone is off from work. While they were packing they're bags so they can leave, they're doorbell was sounded. Harry rushed to get the door as the doorbell kept getting pressed. Harry unlocked and swung the door open.

"Oi, oi!" It was Louis, he had a big smile on his face. Harry laughed and asked him why he was visiting. "I was just stopping by because me, you, LaRay, your mother and sister, and the boys are going to the beach! A holiday! Something all of us need because of all the drama that went down." Harry moved aside, opening the door wider, letting Louis walk in.

"Yeah, it was LaRay's idea." Harry said closing the door. "She suggested that I needed to be around friends and family."

"That's very sweet of her." Louis said sitting on the couch. "Speaking of that golden girl, where is she? We need to go shopping again."

"She's in her room packing." Harry asked obliviously. "And shopping for what?"

"Her swimsuit." Louis said.

"We can buy one when we go." Harry said sitting down next to him.

"Now you know the beach doesn't really have great swimsuits. Besides, I'm pretty sure she would be more comfortable in a one piece than a two piece." Louis said smugly smiling. "Also, you don't want all those boys staring at her, do you?"

Harry thought about it, Louis did have a point. He doesn't want any boys catcalling or whatever they do nowadays. But then again..."She dated Niall."

"True, but Zayn has a crush on her." Louis said teasingly and truthfully. Harry was genuinely taken back, he didn't know that. Well, he did notice that Zayn was close to LaRay and he did paint a picture for her. Plus, he did take her to get her license and they went to the movies.