Reign Fanfiction

Introduction

Hi guys this is my first ever trying to write a book so just tell me what you think and give me some advice on what i should write about. Well he here's the story hope you enjoy!

Chapter 1
Mary's point of view
I woke up and all of the sudden Francis just hands me some breakfast. "Good morning beautiful." says Francis. "What's this for?" I said "Oh nothing, nothing at all." he said nervously "Francis what did you do?" I asked"I might of forgotten to plan our honeymoon again?"he said sheepishly "Francis it has been a month since we were married and you haven't planned our honeymoon yet?!"I question yelled  "Sorry?" he said it sounded more like a question though.

I look at him again and say  "In this marriage I am planning all the personal vacations including this one from now on." He doesn't seem to mind what so ever, in fact I think he might be happy about it. I stood up and go get changed into my Day dress and suddenly I feel like I'm sick. "Francis I think I'm going to be sick." He rushes over to me and helps me to the bathroom. "Francis can you go get nastradamus?" he leaves me in my puking state and after he does I stop puking. Finally when he walks in the room he tells me to use the restroom in the pot. I do as I'm told and I'm really hoping for the good news this time instead of your just sick. He comes back and he gives us his grasious smile and says, "your with child your majesty." My heart leaped out of my chest and I cried out in joy. My arms went around Francis' neck and then Francis leans in and kisses me tenderly. I looked up at him and he says " I probably shouldn't of kissed you." I slapped him on the shoulder and he mouths "that hurt" in a fake pout. I just rolled my eyes and said, "well, thats what you get for saying stupid things such as that. If you continue, you may never get a kiss again." With that said I squealed and jumped out of the room with him hot on my trail.

  After our little chase with each other we decided to go tell Catherine. We walked side by side to her chamber and when we walked in she smiled and screamed, "Mary's Pregnant.!" I looked a little taken back and she just rolled her eyes and exasperated, "Mary you are skinny but you have been the tiniest bit bloated and I already had your chamber pot tested a week ago. I just wanted to hear it from you yourselves." I opened my mouth to speak but Francis just looked at me and I thought better of it and just decided to just retire for the night.
"Hey Francis I think I'm gonna go to bed now."
Francis' point of view
All of the sudden Mary collapses onto the ground and I scream aloud, "Guards! " and they started rushing ready for an incoming threat. I grabbed one by the arm and told them in a rush, "Go and get  Nastradamus. You, help me bring Mary to her chambers" I looked down at Mary who was clutching my arm helplessly in pain. I whispered sweet nothings into her ear. When we walked into Mary's chamber the Nastradamus came in and I looked over to Mary who was peacefully asleep. Nastradamus says that she is going to be out due to stress and most likely shock. He also says that she lost the baby. That news just killed me inside. I felt awful. What am I going to tell Mary?
Next morning
Finally Mary woke up and I almost jumped at her asking, "How you feeling?" And all she could do is, "How's the baby? What happened? How long have I been asleep?"
I intrupted her and reluctantly said "Mary...we lost the child. I'm so sorry. And you were asleep for only the night." She just looked at me in complete shock and pain filed her eyes. All her walls broke down and she just hugged me tightly like I was just going to disappear as she cried. Eventually, she went back to sleep. My poor, poor, Mary.
I left the room in silence and pain trying to figure a way to talk to my mother about all of this.

How was my first chapter does it need to be longer and it doesn't hurt comment so please give me advise but if you want to say something bad KEEP IT TO YOURSELF. Okay😀