Dark Touch

Chapter 2

''Mommy, I want to be just like you,'' little me said while smiling.

''You will certainly be just like me when your 16,'' she responded, but then her eyes started getting bigger, ''Ah! Your wings!''

''What?'' I asked then looked in the mirror, ''No!'' I woke up, screaming and somebody else screaming too but it sounded like they were in physical pain. I soon realized that the scream sounded familiar because it was from the girl I talked to yesterday. She tried to escape but they would pull her and use fire to burn her over and over. Screams were everywhere now. It sounded like the commander was taking everybody's souls, then I was next. He came running down the hallway with blood all over him. I am actually surprised he got, not only his hands, but everywhere else of himself dirty with blood especially he is not the one that does the dirty work. But it wasn't just any blood it was big splatters of blood and his shirt was teared like he got attacked by a very vicious animal. Then he grabbed the cell and pulled it open.

His face looked crazy, like he lost his mind, ''Come here you bitch! You ruined everything!'' He yelled, ''I won't kill you but I know who will and I believe you know him,'' the commander said with a big evil grin on his face.

''Hey, Lori you missed me?'' A strong and bold voice asked. Did he just call me by my real name?  I thought.

''Deumus what are you doing here? We are waiting for the person who is going to kill me.We weren't waiting for a pervert demon,'' I replied laughing inside, ''Anyways you had your chance to kill me and you blew it. No way your going to kill me now.'' I said looking around for my killer. Then he took out an improved gun and pointed it to my head.

''No, sweetheart this is my one chance to kill you,'' he said all pouted face like. As he came closer and shot a bullet in the roof he continued, ''Now does that prove that I will kill you?''

''I have to admit I am shaking a little bit, but I still don't think you will kill me,'' I answered calmly while smiling. 

''Your such a bitch,'' then he pointed the gun at the commander's chest.

I opened my mouth and said while rolling my eyes, ''Your not really going to do it.''

He didn't say anything but the commander said, ''Dark Angel is right were best buds.'' Deumus still didn't say a word then he pulled the trigger, the commander then pulled the emergency alarm, security was running everywhere. And all I could hear was gun shots, I then looked around for Deumus, nowhere to be found again. The commander then grabbed my arm and said with gritted teeth, he was shot on the leg, ''Your coming with me.''

But then out of nowhere the mysterious voice girl comes in the room and saves me. She was covered in blood and lashes, how can she get up after what they have done to her, I thought. When she was done with him he was on the floor covered with blood. She comes sliding over to me on the floor, ''Are you OK?''

''Yeah,'' I answered with a lousy face, ''Thank you. I'm just so weak.''

''No problem, Ariel is my name,'' she replies.

''Lori dark angel, the one and only.'' I said happy. Then out of nowhere the commander takes out a gun and pulls the trigger twice heading straight for Ariel but instead of it shooting her, he shot me on my wings. But Ariel got the gun from him behind his back and kept shooting him until he was dead.

The last thing I heard from her was,'' Stay with me, stay with me.'

Liam's Point of view

Lori has been in a coma for about a year now. And nobody knew where she was me. Commander J has been keeping her in a white room strapped down. I've been trying to get her out of there.

Then I thought, This is all my fault, I yelled in my head. She was my best friend, but to me she was still my first girlfriend I felt confident and comfortable with. She probably doesn't feel that way to me anymore after what I did to her for her to be in this situation, I thought sadly. But, she probably stopped loving me a long time ago before we broke up after all the other things I did to her. But I have changed and now we're closer than ever. Now she is never going to forgive me after this. She may say everything I have done is OK and only mistakes. But to me they are the death of me.

Hey, everybody I wanted to tell you the very first picture is Lori aka Dark Angel and the second picture is the commander! I know this chapter was short but the next chapter will be longer than this one I promise! I only put the song for Liam when the guy sings because he misses her of everything with her! Hope you guys and girls and women and men still love the book and will keep reading Dark Touch! And don't forget people that think this book is too much for you or your under +18 there is a Dark Angel Clean Version!