So I've been reading a lot of negative comments about Lilly's behavior to Chance on how she's dumb for not seeing how he's in love with her. Then there's some comments not liking how Chance is possessive over Lilly. I've printed out this full story and we'll be going each chapter while reading your comments to fix this story up. I do plan to have this story published one day, but first I want this story to shine and be proud to have written such a story. So please work with me while I start from the beginning and see how I can change Lilly and Chance's behavior to one another. And yes I'll still be working on the sequel 'The Secret Hiding Place' while I'm revising this story.
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The Kept Secret (Slowly Editing)
General FictionYou can never escape from your secret When Lilly Dunn found herself pregnant after a drunken one-night stand with Chance Morgan, she felt scared of what her family and Chance would think. Chance is known as a playboy amongst their peers and she does...
