Sunk into Depression of Abuse and Rejection

hey sorry if i was taking so long from my other story, i had no internet which really sucks, i got stuck on my other story The Dancing Demon and trying to figure out what to write next. i have been thinking about writing this story for a while and hope you guys like it!!!!!!! i accepted criiticzism and would like it if you pointed out my flaws, spelling, and errors!!!! thank you

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Daisy Jenkins is a werewolf who gets abused and ignored by her brother,

the alpha, and pack. when it comes to her 17th birthday she finds her mate and

her mate is the school's jackass. so he rejects and she is sunk into depression.

she goes from a natural looking girl to dark.

when she feels the pain of her mate with another female,

she cant take it anymore.

she runs into the woods and there will lie her doom. as an demon of souls finds her

and tells her she will be safe from all of the pain. so he gives her

demon blood and he said it will help her with the pain but

what he didnt tell her is that it will lead her to her ultimate doom.

her soul. if she drinks enough of the demon blood. her soul will become his forever.

can her so called mate, brother, and her best friend help her before she is damned?

stay tuned