A Little Blind Rage

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A little blind boy chained to paving block

his grey, mute mouth matching his hollow mind.

Dour face down-turned to cold dead digits locked

around red begging box: "Please help the blind."



Saw a certain "tragic" charity box on the way to work today, and it ticked me off a little. I find word stresses hard to figure out, so it'd be really nice to know if I got the iambic pentameter right with this.

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