Redemption
To redeem, people sacrifice their closest dearest possessions; slaughtered animals and spill blood. They got salvation.
"I offer you myself" her gaze firm and tone unflagging as she stood in front of him for one last time, craving for salvation for one last time.
His eyes cold and distant; hiding the vulnerable part of him inside. And Maya felt she was the same 12 year old girl standing behind the tree, soaking under rain, peeking onto that 14 year old boy who was screaming for his life and she was standing there being the helpless culprit.
"I don't need your offerings" Hussain shook his head callously, his eyes narrowed anger and pain seethe out. "I need your soul. I wanted to tear it apart and rip it bit by bit as you ripped mine" Maya's heart stopped beating.
"I hate you Maya as much as I hate that day, and I will take my revenge. Never forget this. We are not done yet" His words cold and sharp, and threat solemn; as if he would actually rip her soul a part.
But if he only knew.... he had already done that to her.
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Shehry said forgiving was easy and I should have let go...
But it wasn't my plan. My plan was... revenge and blood.
For me letting go wasn't easy____ Hussain.
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Redemption is the struggle to get over your own hatred. Its the struggle to fight against all the odds and stand for what is right.
It's the story of Maya; a hindu girl, a doctor who promised to spend her life serving humanity who took an oath to stand against all the feralities of society. Despite having scars of yesterday and fear of tomorrow she was a happy girl.
And Hussain; an ordinary middle class architect leading a simple life apparently, but deep down had hatred and vengeance running through his blood. He craved for the love he lost long ago and he knew he would never have it back in his life.
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Disclaimer: I am a person with very low IQ and almost no knowledge about stuff going on around me in this world, so yes, there are going to be blunders throughout the story but I just want to clear that I don't mean to hurt the sentiments of anyone no matter a Muslim or a Hindu or ANYONE, and I MEAN IT. If at any point you feel hurt or disrespected please forgive and forget.
Don't be Hussain. Don't plan revenge against me ;)
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Warning: If you are too secular DON'T READ MY STORY. if you are too religious DON'T READ MY STORY. if you hate hindu-muslim talks DON'T EVEN COME NEAR MY STORY. if you like fairy tales PLEASE BACK OFF. if you want a'....and they live happily ever after' DON'T EVEN THINK THAT AM A WRITER AND THIS IS SOME STORY. SHUT DOWN THE WINDOW. AND SLEEP
Others can freely enjoy ;)
I wonder if even anyone left out there:-p
Anyways you people have been WARNED so enjoy on your own risk
Hope to have a great time with all of you.
And last but definitely not the least I would love to thank all those amazing readers cum friends cum motivators cum encourag-ers ;) who made awesome covers for Redemption. I love you all for them :*
Hafsa you are amazing :) Thanks buddy :* for all of them :)
And Fakhriya :) You always make such beautiful covers and this is just too good :) Thanks a lot for the efforts :) I owe you
P.S. I changed the name ;)
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Redemption
Short StoryRedemption is about so many people, so many emotions but at the end they all just need one thing; salvation and peace. We all do. right? But its hard when a hindu hurts a muslim and and muslim fights a hindu, things go complicated more than they oug...