Taken

"I'm going to get something from the house. Don't you dare try to ecscape. Remember, no matter what I'll always find you." He said in a deep voice. "Oh yah, and the boys are coming tonight." That made me feel good and bad. Good because Tyler might help me escape. Bad because the blondy is coming. The man went inside. This is my one time to ecscape. I looked around. There was a tall fence. That was my plan until I saw the large red electric fence sign. There was a large bush that I decided to hide in. I ran over to the bush. Just as I got in a comfortable position the man walked back outside. He was pulling a rolled up carpet. He dropped it just as he realized I was gone. He ran over to the fence and went to a box on the side of the fence. He opened it and turned the electricity off. He climbed the fence and ran probably to look for me. I probably would have ran at that point but that's when I looked over at the carpet. It had fallen open. That's when I realized that there was a body in it. It was Evan. I couldn't move. Tears ran down my eyes. I ran over to him. His eyes were shut and he was just laying there lifeless. I lyed my head on his chest, crying. After what felt like hours I finally got the strangeth to get up. My legs were shaking but I managed to run to the house. I opened the back door running to a window. I saw a road out the window. I got a chair and smashed the window. It shattered and I pushed my self through it. I was about half wy through it when a large piece of glass entered my skin. There was so much pain. I couldn't go any farther. I dropped back on the floor, blood gushing out of my wound. I lyed there screaming in pain. The man heard me and came in the house. "Your in big trouble now missy." He said like he was having fun.
#*******#*********#*********#****#hey I hope this was a little more action for u. Give me suggestions of what should happen next. If I like your idea I will put it in my story and dedicate the chapter to you
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~Andrea