falling

chap 1

Raph pov

              Its not unusual to battle shredder every once in a while, but this time he really got under my skin.

After injuring and knocking leo out cold, I was the last one still able to fight. He said things like 'that temper is always getting you and your brothers killed' and 'you truly the worse member of your team' that only made me mader. I gave him all my strength but it wasnt enough.

The mean things he said continued and i kept going, but soon enough I gave in. I already had smaller cuts and bruises, but I was worn out by now. I just couldn't respond fast enough to shredder.

He cut deeply through my mind section and knocked my head so hard into the ground that I blacked out.

Honestly I felt so alone after I blacked out, and all around me was darkness.

Then I remembered my brothers, laying on the ground defeated by shredder. I almost started crying right there, I can't just cry like that. I felt like I lost my brothers. How could I let this happen.

Tonight I'm so alone

This sorrow takes a hold

I finely remembered what happened to me, I know I'm supposed to be feeling pain right now, but there was none. In fact I felt cold and empty.

Don't leave me here so cold

(Never want to be so cold)

I remembered my brothers, what they use to do for me when I was scared and when we were really young.

Leo would talk me though it, Donnie would listen and hug me, And Mikey would make me laugh. I sighed a little. But I grew away from them and hurt them. I wasted what is and will be the most of are lives being mean.

Your touch used to be so kind

Your touch used to give me life

I've waited all this time,

I've wasted so much time

I just wanted to see my brothers, see how Leo was and I just needed to talk to some one. I started to feel alone. Please I can't be alone, can I, am I alone?

No Raphael, Im here.

"Who said that" I jumped and immediately took a stance. I was confused, it wasn't a voice I recognized, what the hell is going on?

Donnie pov

I rubbed my head looking at the situation were in. Leo was waking up and Mikey was helping.

"Mikey, get Leo back to the lair" I yelled at them and Mike nodded in response.

"What about you?" Leo yelled at me.

"I'm getting Raph and we're all leaving" I said and looked over at Raph who was fighting shredder. Raph didnt react in time to defend agest shredder, and two giant gashes went acrossed his mid section and his head was forced into the ground by shredders fist.

My eyes widened and I quickly hit shredder away with my bow staf and grabed Raph and threw a smoke bomb disappearing, Leo and Mikey followed.

I got back to the lair and put Raph on my table, and at the moment I was worried about every one, but Raph was first.

He was losing blood to fast and my first reaction was to cauterize the wound.

I put the hot metal on his wounds and I was realved as the bleeding subsided but not completely stoping. I did the best I could stitching him up, but it was hard to do because of his shell.

I attached different medical machines to him and his heart beat was  slow and weak, the blood loss didn't help at all.

I examed his head, he was lucky he didn't crack his skull open, but there was a spot that I needed to wrap. I finished wraping his  wounds and I moved on.

Leo had a concussion, and while all of us had cuts and bruses that I took care of, our concern wasn't on each other, but it was on the turtle with a supper low pulse and barly breathing.

All I could think of, is that he was in a comma, Then again I'm not thinking strait at the moment. Raph was all we we conrcered about, every thing could wait.

(Sory its kinda short but im a lazy writer and i wrote this at midnight so dont mind the spelling)

( HULLER! I EDITED THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF ERT!!~~~~  580o05505 )