Chapter 11

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/AN: I'm debating on leaving this series behind... As much as I hate the idea of leaving a story unfinished, it can't be helped sometimes. I might start on a new story, but I've lost my direction with this one. If people want, I can finish this in two or three chapters, using time skips in order to get a good ending? I am really sorry, but I refuse to leave it without giving you an ending to it. Don't hate me too much.../

~Krisms POV~

I watched over Minx for the rest of the day, wanting to make sure she was okay. I refused to give up on her, but it seemed everyone else accepted that it was unlikely she would pull through.

I was sat there for 2 hours with Minx, not being bothered by anyone. I began to get more and more hopeful that she would wake up when she twitched. My heart leapt when she shifted slightly. It was only a matter of time now.

A few more hours passed before my hopeful bubble was shattered. Minx had shifted more, and a pained grunt fell from her mouth. I jumped, expecting her to open her eyes. Instead though, she started convulsing, her breath stuttering. I panicked and shouted for the medic. He came in rapidly with wide eyes. Upon seeing Minx, he ran to her side, tending to her.

After a small time, she went still. I watched for that rise and fall of a chest, but my heart broke when it didn't come. I moved to her side, pleading with her to come back.

A gasp. Eyes fly open. Coughs rattle from an aching throat. My fiancée rattled to life, choking on air.
"K-Krism...?"

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