Ryan's Hope

The Cafe

“So, should we try this place out first?” asked Hope. She pointed to a simple, elegant, but busy café. “Sure. Let’s go talk to the boss.” 

"What position are you looking for?" Hope glanced at Ryan. "Something... non-socail." "Alright, you can start out as janitors and work your way up to kitchen assistants." After the paperwork and stuff the two began to wipe, scrub, mop, brush, and dust thier butts off. After what seemed like eternity it was closing time.

"Wow. Good job you two. You can collect your pay in the kitchen." The pair headed into the kitchen to find a small crowd around a kitchen island.

"Newbies!" a girl screamed. "Calm down Carol. Geez." the boy turned, "Hey, I'm Alex. And as you already know, this is Carol." Carol had blue hair and Alex had black and blond. "This-" Alex said pointing, "Is Liam." Liam had blond hair and glasses that covered his eyes. "We don't have many paid  people working here but we don't lack much in skill. At the end of each day we'll meet up here and you'll collect your earnings and if your still working or need to leave early we'll leave the earnings out." "Okay." the two said in unison.

"So here is your earnings from today." He gave Hope $200 and a scone and Ryan $210 and a macaron. "Wait, why does he get 10 extra dollars? I mean, I'm fine with it, just... curious." "Some girl told me to give it to him as tips. There's a number on there too." Ryan's eyes immediately flashed over to see Hope's reaction but instead met her eyes. "Listen, Alex, I won't take any tips from anyone. I honestly don't need it." "Really? Today wasn't very busy though. Well, I'll just keep it in the tips jar until you need it." 

"Bye newbies!" Carol yelled jumping up and down. "Quiet!" Alex whisper-yelled. Liam waved and walked off and Hope and Ryan headed home. "So this is it." Hope said. "Yep. Bye." He closed the door on Hope, not trying to be rude. Hope went off who knows where and Ryan danced around. "I  got a job!" he yelled. He went on his twitter which was flooded with e-mails and tweets. "Just got a job." he said. He closed his laptop and went to sleep, smiling for the first time in days.

So? How is it? I know it could've been better but I just rushed a bit. So comment and review! Also, I will be accepting characters from you all. You just need:

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P.S. : Macarons are cream-filled sandwhiches. Macaroons are cookies. I took French. Spread the news!

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