Once upon a time in a land far far away...
Just kidding!!
A series of some of the stories I've read and appreciate. A story, for me, need not be perfect. No story ever is. Good plot, decent writing and I'm in. Therefore, INTUITION
Synopsis:"Promise me Cloud," Faith implored her voice barely audible. She lifted her gaze up at him yet once again. "Promise me, that you will protect my heart for it has deserted me for you."
A silent hiss escaped the assassin's lips at her confession. "How can I mistreat your heart when my soul is in your hands, Faith?" He vocalized earnestly.
He knew that Faith was in his blood, his heart and mind. God, he knew that the ferocious assassin was in love with the girl he once wished to exploit. ----------------------------------------------- Cloud is a man feared among the worst of Assassins, so dangerous that killing him is almost impossible. How fate brings forth his journey to meet an innocent girl, who does not believe in Assassins, for her they are evil monsters worshiping the cursed life of satan. How Cloud, the known Assassin pairs with her? That is something only time can unveil.
Read to find out what happens in the game of Darkness.
Title: 9.4/10 Nothing too complicated. Nothing to dwell deeper about. Short and to the point. It straight up tells what the story is going to be and what exactly the author is aiming at.
Description/Foreword: 10/10 There is a snippet of the conversation between the characters in the description which is absolutely wonderful and adorable. Good use of language. Beautifully written. The prologue is spot on. I have no words. I might even give a 12 on 10 for it.
¡Ay! Esta imagen no sigue nuestras pautas de contenido. Para continuar la publicación, intente quitarla o subir otra.
Originiality/Creativity/Plot: 10/10 Amazing. The concept is so new and different. Yes, we know what assassins are. But the plot matters. Quite frankly, when I decide to read a story, I construct a plot in my mind. If the story deludes my plot-in a good way-completely, that is the story that captures my mind, attention, heart, spirit, everything. Because come on. Who would want to read a story when we know exactly what's going to commence. I certainly don't. Twists, when they are quite forwardly announced makes readers less immersed in the story and more keen on solving the puzzle alone. And that shouldn't be the case in my opinion. When you read a story, it should make you think,think and think again. It should draw you in. This story did that to me. And I assure you with all that I have, that this story will get you interested right from the first chapter. I, never in my wildest dreams, would've imagined a plot like this. The originality and imagination is above me. The story could be a movie for all it's worth.
Writing: 10/10 Magnifique. The opening chapter was bang on. The first few lines of the first paragraph and I was already won over. The writing, detailing everything is on point. There are a few typos here and there as is with every other book here on Wattpad but it is so minor that you could easily look past it. Sometimes imagination comes easy but to put it into words and to do so perfectly is the most aggravating part. To write a story such as this which has so many crucial points, where a single error could cause the story to turn out differently, I think she deserves accolades. The story includes a few action sequences, each with concepts miles apart from one another. The thing with writing such scenes is, if you do not word it well enough, you can't convey to the reader the exact image you're trying to portray. WRITING an action sequence is more difficult than one perceives it to be. She has done a splendid job with that, so much that I was, at times, quite intimidated while reading it. Brilliant.
¡Ay! Esta imagen no sigue nuestras pautas de contenido. Para continuar la publicación, intente quitarla o subir otra.
¡Ay! Esta imagen no sigue nuestras pautas de contenido. Para continuar la publicación, intente quitarla o subir otra.
Characterization: 10/10 The author has put much effort into each character and it shows. The characters are so unique. Each one has a different personality as they should. They play their individual selves in the story without overpowering the other characters. What I love about this book is that the characters also don't overplay themselves. They stick to their personalities. The characters are perfect in all sense of the word. If I were to change anything about them, they wouldn't be the same. The story wouldn't be the same. This isn't a typical love story where they fall in love and are all dreamy about each other. There aren't any "very personal" scenes to portray their love, which has become almost like a requirement in Wattpad romance stories. Even if there are, they are very subtle. Yet the emotions are still all the same. Or may I dare say, more enchanting. I love how the author describes the main characters' relationship that way. It is extremely endearing. What I also love about the characters is their names. Oh my god. Their names are so amazing. Cloud. Faith. Eragon. Baron. Rosaline. Tybalt. Alina. Rory. Mia. Wade. Donceiux. Maynor. Alexander. Saya. Dantae. Jayden. Klaus. Hijikata. Malcolm. Holako. Atorius. Yes! I remember quite a few.
¡Ay! Esta imagen no sigue nuestras pautas de contenido. Para continuar la publicación, intente quitarla o subir otra.
¡Ay! Esta imagen no sigue nuestras pautas de contenido. Para continuar la publicación, intente quitarla o subir otra.
General Comments: The story has a kind of historic feel to it and yet not, which is interesting. The swathe of emotions this story brings forth is unreal. I've read and reread the story tons of times, yet it still seems as intense as the first time I read it. Love this story so much. It's been a while since the author last updated it and I'm waiting with bated breath for her to do so. Beautiful. Amazing. All adjectives related to good, put it in and you'll have Assassin's Bride.
