Intuition

Silent Love

Story: Silent Love

Author: Missii

Synopsis:
It was Luna's first day at her new high school as a senior and the small and soft-spoken girl immediately catches the attention of the schools tall, dark, mysterious and handsome man, Hunter.

As their somewhat unusual relationship blossoms into something more than friendship, so does the jealousy and Alpha possessiveness within Hunter start to arise. Especially when a shy, sweet boy enters into the picture and catches Luna's attention and is seen as a threat in Hunter's eyes.

How will Luna cope with all the misunderstandings, secrecy, jealousy and possessiveness but most importantly how will she cope with Hunter's dark past? Will they break away or walk away hand in hand?

Genre: School, Romance

Status: Completed
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Title: 10/10
Nothing too complicated. Honestly though, I thought the story would take a drastic turn post a few chapters like I've seen in countless other stories rendering the title rather nonsensical? If that's even a word. Thankfully, this story didn't. The author stuck to the concept until the very end and that is what made me enjoy this story a whole lot more. Sometimes we see the stories start with a concept and it's completely lost somewhere down the line. That frustrates me so much. Like why don't you just stick to the concept!? There are some readers who read your story for that particular theme and losing it right in the middle of the story throws us off. Love the author for sticking by the concept.

Description/Foreword: 8/10
Okay, the description is good. Nothing over the top. Nothing too special. It was good. It was great in fact for a normal non-supernatural story. But to a lot of people, this would create a misconception for there are quite a few phrases which you would 'normally' associate with a werewolf story. ( p.s. including myself :p ) Not that it's the author's fault or anything. It's just a notion on Wattpad to associate such words with a supernatural story. Nonetheless, it was accurately worded.

Originiality/Creativity/Plot: 8/10
Wouldn't say the concept was all too original. There are quite a few stories along the lines of this. Problematic male protagonist. New girl in school. Girl joins his posse. Develop a connection. Yup! Seen them.Yet, I wouldn't take the originality away. There were certain parts I did read for the first time and I enjoyed it. Like I've mentioned earlier, the plot develops really well. There are no loopholes, no confusions, no unresolved issues. Overall, a really good read.
The only odd thing I found from the whole book was the fact that she (the female protagonist) could understand him without words being exchanged. I mean, okay I get it it's a fiction and it's a romance genre. 'Thank you', 'his eyes looked apologetic', 'I saw hurt in his eyes', I'll give these to you. But understanding one completely just by one look in the eye? I don't know. However, I convinced myself in the end that this is the reason why the story is titled the way it is.

Writing: 9/10
Written in first person point of view. Neatly worded and presented. The writing is more of a conversational kind to be honest. Simple but not boring. Full length chapters. Something I personally appreciate. I really like it. There were so many parts that made me laugh, parts where I smiled so hard. The conversations were so believable. Sometimes authors don't put enough effort in getting their words right. It occurs to me at times that authors over think the characters and word them in a more mature way than they are ought to be. The author made me really happy in this respect. She's pictured them perfectly like they are supposed to be. High school students. I love that.

Characterization: 10/10
Now this is my favourite part. I love love love all the characters here. ALL of them. To an extent that I want each one of them in my life. They're just so cute. They're so relatable. And their conversations are so hilarious. I have a smile on my face as I write this. The parents, siblings, friends, teachers, plus all those other very minor characters, the writer has done a splendid job with the characterization. I have no qualms whatsoever with the characterization. I highly doubt they could be further perfected. And I was quite surprised that the other characters had equal, if not more, roles to play through the story. You wouldn't see this in a lot of stories, so the change was really warming and refreshing.
Different personalities, different viewpoints. Beautiful! This is one of the only stories where I adore the other characters more than I do the main leads.

General Comments:
A light hearted high school story. If you're looking for something funny with an element, this is totally for you. This is a story that incorporates every aspect of a high school life I think. There's humor, there are problems, there's romance, there's friendship, there's sibling love, there's family. It's a package.

HIGHLY RECOMMEND!!