Unconditionally - The Beginning Of Revelation

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Story: Unconditionally

Author: mAy_justimagine

Synopsis: I listened expectantly as he spoke the next words, "There are many,many presumptions about the Alpha, most of which may be true for others, but it isn't so for you.
I furrowed my eyebrows, not comprehending what he meant.
He smiled, "Simply put, expect the unexpected "
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Suzzanah Winters is just about to find out that everything is NOT as it seems.
Happy about having nailed a job in the prestigious ROYALE Industries, she could have never imagined what she would have by the end of her very first day of work, which are:
•One less garment
•One more injury
•Several mind – blogging experiences
•And a permanent blush

Add to it :
•A mysterious riddle-throwing boss with an unhealthy obsession for wolves.
•A perpetually jittery co-employee whose list of rules is longer than his frame.
•And a handsome CEO named Zuerien Kai Royale aka ALPHA aka KING, on whom she doesn't make the best first impression.

What does all this spell?
         PANDEMONIUM

And this is just the beginning...
Step into a world filled with werewolves, romance, humor, mystery & lots of hot paranormal chaos!
And remember, in the Supernatural world there is but one guiding principle: Expect the Unexpected!

Genre: Supernatural, Werewolf, Romance

Status: Ongoing
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Title: 10/10 
There couldn't have been a more fitting title for this story. UNCONDITIONALLY sums it all. Unconditional love, Unconditional friendship, Unconditional loyalty, Unconditional relationships, Unconditional adventures, Unconditional emotions, Unconditional enthusiasm, Unconditional mystery. Everything in this story is UNCONDITIONAL. So, 10/10 for the title.

Description/Foreword: 10/10
Descriptions are always fun and interesting when you have a snippet of the story included in it. A good description is what lures the readers in and this story has just that. It'll get you interested at first glance. And I am all about good descriptions.

The foreword or the prologue is beautifully written. It gives the readers an insight into Zuerien’s past. It is in his own point of view which makes it better to understand his feelings. It also explains why he feels so detached even in the midst of people who love him and have sworn their lives to him. Amazing.

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Originality/Creativity/Plot: 10/10 Can I give her a 12/10? Coz this is as good as creativity can get

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Originality/Creativity/Plot: 10/10
Can I give her a 12/10? Coz this is as good as creativity can get. This story is out of this world, and quite literally too. This is so much more than just a werewolf story. SO MUCH MORE. Kudos to the author. The plot in itself is so alluring. Often times, it so happens that when you have more number of elements in one story, there is a very high chance of them getting muddled up which leaves the reader puzzled. Yet, this story brings together all the elements, elaborately and beautifully so. Should this story ever be published, I would be least surprised, for it has such an amazing plot.

Writing Style: 10/10
Written in First person  P.O.V. First person point of view is all about seeing the world through the character's eyes. And writing one is quite difficult too. One needs to be careful to not be under detailing or over detailing it. Good job with this as well.
Good grammar. Excellent wordplay. Marvelous imagination. Detailed perfectly. Full length chapters. Updates quite frequently. What more could you ask for?

 What more could you ask for?

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Characterization: 10/10 This is one book where I love all the characters

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Characterization: 10/10
This is one book where I love all the characters. All of them. Even those that are ought to be disliked. Because the author points out quite subtly that there is a reason for every character there for being the way they are. And that, for me is intriguing. Each and every character has such a unique personality that you can't help but love each one of them. The characters hold their personality and develop over time and not drastically.

I once told the author that she has ruined me for any and all potential boyfriends out there because I will always look for a Zuerien in them. Zuerien is not the most prefect guy you'll meet at first sight. But over time, he will make you feel that there can be no other guy who could love his partner to such limits. And that makes him perfect.
Suzzanah. What do I say about Suzzanah? She brings a smile on your face without even having to try hard. She is clumsy. And that will make you fall for her. Optimistic. Someone who spreads love and all those little tender feelings that makes her, her. Makes her Suzzanah. Zuerien’s Suzzanah.
And so is every other character in this story special. Such detailed version of each and every character is very rarely seen. That makes Unconditionally  so very special.

General Comments:  I honestly have nothing negative to say about this story. Love, love, love it. I have tried my hardest to not be biased toward this story,( doesn't look like it though, lol) seeing as though it is my current obsession. Well even if I was a first time reader, would totally give this one full score.
The author is a sweetheart. The story. Oh the story is supercalifrajilisticexpialidocious.
You'll be missing out on a great story if you aren't a reader yet. So do go check it out. TODAY!

       
               HIGHLY HIGHLY RECOMMEND!!!

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