This is my third fanfic so it might not be that good. Please give me some feedback as I would like to know what you think and what I could improve on Thank you
Characters
Harry Styles
Zayn Malik
Liam Payne
Niall Horan
Louis Tomlinson
Harry’s Girlfriend: @summerc123
Zayn’s Girlfriend: @1DCharlottex
Liam’s Girlfriend: @GezFez4EVER
Niall's Girlfriend: LouisaTommo1D
Louis’s Girlfriend: @Liams_Woody69
Harry’s Sister: @HannahMoriarty3
Summers POV
*beep beep* There was my alarm. It was 6:50am and it was time to get ready for school. It was the last day of year 11 so not a lot would be happening.I put on my foul hideous snot green uniform and went to have a wash and clean my teeth. After about 45 minutes I was ready and able to set off for school
*you have a message* My phone started telling me I had a message. I ran over to where my phone was on charge and saw it was a message from Maddi
‘Got some great news to tell you all so excited I can’t wait!’
Maddi had been my best friend since nursery and we had stuck together through everything.We hdfallen out once but there’s no need for that detail. Maddi was such a lovely person. She had beautiful blue/hazel coloured eyes, her hair was brown, and she was quite tall and had an amazing figure. I’d love to be her she's gorgeous and so lovable!
Maddi wasn’t my only best friend though. I had 3 other great friends, Sian, Louisa and Charlotte. Sian was such a pretty girl as well. She had beautiful brown eyes and lovely brown/goldy hair. She had such a bubbly personality. She was so fun and a great joker and she loved a good party. If there was one going you could count on Sian being there. Then there was Louisa. Louisa was tall and had a great figure. Her hair was wavy and she had lovely tanned skin. She was one of the loudest in the group and she was quite a joker. She had a bubbly personality but when it comes to her she is very romantic at the heart but is quite sensitive at times. That’s what I loved about her. Last but not least there was Charlotte. Charlotte was friendly to anyone who came around and liked to talk. She had beautiful blonde wavy hair and her brown eyes glistened in the sunlight. She had a bubbly personality and very immature. These 4 girls could cheer me up when I was down and I we would do literally everything together.
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