Some words are just unavoidable. We can't help but use them, they are necessary to finish a sentence even. But others? Maybe you're better off just skipping them.
Orbs- Eyes would work better in my opinion
Stared- use some big words like gawked or gazed. It's sounds more appropriate
Said- I despise the word for so many reasons. I'm one of those people who have to be descriptive when someone talks. There is no "Hello," Kyoya said. It's "Hello," Kyoya introduced. It makes you sound more professional, of course there are a few scenes where you have to use the bloody term "Said."
Laughed- so many synonyms like chuckled and giggled. Laughed is just really plain unless you have already used those terms once before, then it just sounds repetitive and you should use laughed.
Annoying- this term is used to describe Tamaki a lot and it really bothers me because annoying is such a one way word. How about boisterous or arrogant? Sounds a lot better.
Leave some more words down in the comments, and if I really like it I will add it (of course with credit)
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OHSHC Cliche's
FanfictionI read a lot of Ouran fan-fiction, so excuse me as I throw shade at some of the biggest cliche's in the OHSHC stories. ✖️The truth hurts, so get it bitterly sweet✖️
