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IT IS IMPORTANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter nine

Fate's POV

It's been three weeks, three weeks since Liam and Walter had joined me in this hell hole. Three weeks since we've heard about the others. Three weeks of Liam leaving each day for experiments. Three weeks of them knowing how to freeze Liam's powers for how ever long they want. Three damn weeks.

"Fate?" Liam asked worriedly, shaking my shoulder.

"Hmmm," I mumble.

"She doesn't look to good," Walter says to Liam. I currently had my head on his shoulder trying to sleep.

"I know, that's what worries me." I feel a hand crease my face.

"I'm cold," I mumble scooting closer to Liam, I hear the door creak open.

"Liam you need to get her out of here, before the guards get back." I hear a Marcel say nervously.

"Why would I trust you? You're the reason we're here!" Liam gets up making me open my eyes.

"Liam, please listen to me." Marcel begs.

"Why should I? You didn't even warn us! You didn't even warn Harry your own brother." Liam hisses standing in front of Marcel. His figure towering over Marcel's.

"You need to get the werewolves help! They're close to breaking Zayn's power, like yours and Harry's."

"What about Niall and Louis?"

"Louis escaped last week before we could experiment on him and Niall he won't let anyone near him." Marcel explained.

"Liam just take her and go." Walter demands.

"I'll free the other three and tell them where you two are going. Liam you have to get her out of here she sick."

I growled, "I am not sick." Their attention was now on me, "sick means in weak and I am neither."

Marcel and Liam both looked at each other with no emotion on their faces.

"Are you sure it's clear?" Liam silently asked, at that moment I knew Liam had re-trusted him.

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"Liam hurry!" I squeal as fresh air surrounds us.

"Man does this feel good in the lungs." He say under his breath.

"I thought vampires didn't need air." I giggle feeling him take in another lung full of fresh air.

"We don't but it still feels good in the lungs."

I scream as Liam and I were tackled to the ground. The unknown person takes a hold of Liam's collar of his shirt and swings him into a near by tree.

There was a sickening cracking sound from the tree. "Where are my friends?" the person growls.

"Leave him be!" I scream/choke, weakly standing up.

"Where the fuck are my friends!? What did you do to them?" The person grabs ahold of the socked Liam and trows him against the tree again much harder.

"L-Louis it's me!" Liam's words stumble out from sock.

"L-Liam?" Louis stutters before he lungs forward, hugging his brother. "I can't believe it's you."

"It's me Lou. It's me." Liam hugs back with a warm smile.

I smile looking around, now we just needed the other three.

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"Fate! Wake up! It's time for breakfast!" My younger sister screams jumping on my bed. I groan, rubbing the sleep out of my eyes.

"What do you want?" I ask peering at her jumping figure.

"It's morning silly." She giggles causing me to gasp.

It was all a dream.

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MOST READ THE NOTE THINGY TO KNOW WHAT'S THE SURPRISISH NEWS

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Hello there to all the readers who still read this book. I love you!!!!!!!

Alright, let's get straight down to business. I want to address seven things.

1. Ignore the shortness of this chapter.

2. I've been thinking about taking this book off of being on hold

3. I want to bargain with you guys a little

4. About voting, commenting ect.

5. Why this chapter ended like it did

6. Grammar and editing

7. I'm sorry

First off the reason this chapters is soo short is because I felt like I haven't updated in for ever. (Which I know is true) Also, the reason this chapters soo short is I wanted to talk to you about the seven reasons.

Secondly, I've been thinking about taking this book off of hold because now after this chapter I think I have a plot to go with this story instead of having it all over the place.

Thirdly, I want to bargain with you guys. Now I know I've said this at least with three different books that are now deleted but this time I'm serious. I've made a new fan-fiction series and the first books out right as we speak. But no one's read it yet so for my bargain I will update this book once my new book ESCAPISM is up to fifteen reads and has at least five votes and one comment I'll update this book and put the second book of that series up.

Fourthly, I been noticing every once and awhile this book ends up on some of your reading list. That's cool. But the last time this book has been placed under a reading list is a month ago. That kind of hurts. But what really hurts is that the number of votes hasn't went up for months. That hurts even more. What about followers? Fourteen out of how many readers? Please follow. I'd like to hear your guy's thoughts and comments on chapters from now on okay? Maybe I'll even start doing shout-outs to the best comment. And remember maybe the more votes, follows, comments ect.  there is, will cause for a quicker update.

Fifthly, why this chapter ended the way it did is because it's gonna help me get this book back on track for the plot I've set up. Yes, the chapters were all a dream. It'll explain why later in the story so I hope you  continue to read.

Sixthly, I realize the grammar and spelling in this book are really bad and I apologize for it. All these chpaters are UNEDITED unless it say Alessia or I have edited it. I can't spell very well and I've just plain out become lazy so from this point I'm going to try.

Lastly, I am so very sorry that it's taking forever for me to update. Truly, I am.  I won't make up any lame excuse as why I haven't wrote. I was lazy and I didn't like were this book was going. But this chapter (like I said) gets this book on track for the plot. Again sorry.

Oh, one more thing. Does anyone want to make a trailer for this book? Or any of our books out there? Just wondering, because if you do you'll get a shout-out and a follow from me from my personal account.

Stay Beautiful

-SUMMER xoxo

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